The Campfire

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Note: My cousins went scuba diving in Hawaii. Created a “campfire” with lights
both above and below.

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 1/26/2017 12:30:00 PM

The image you paint is quite surreal. I'm visualizing a reflection of the stars and moon on the water? Still working on the title: The Campfire. Maybe a vision of a night campfire on the shore with the flames creating illusions. I'm enjoying pondering your deeper meaning.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2017 2:16:00 PM

They called it the campfire!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2017 2:15:00 PM

Divers had lights underwater and swimmers on top of water shone lights into the water, per my cousin. So cool!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/26/2017 12:12:00 PM

- A lovely image, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2017 12:28:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise xo