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The Cake Journey Ends

A beautiful spring day wedding with big bees, the sun is shining~birds singing~love is in the cool breeze. A lemon cake had been requested by the bride on her knee, soft white frosting to dress the cake in for all to see. A spring garden wedding takes place under the big shade tree, she wanted plenty of pretty flowers~please. I found a pretty yellow china rose it would not freeze, a pretty pink rose made of china not cheese. A lemon cake made with real lemons and grated lemon skin, soft white heavenly light frosting to dress the cake in. The cake journey has ended with a rhyme, now for the two love birds it is honeymoon time. Date Written:4/26/2022 4 Place ~~Note~~ "The Cake Journey" was written on 3/21/2022. This write is part #2, "The Cake Journey Ends." The Ending to "The Cake Journey" Story........... Spring Rhyme - 8-12 LinesContest Judged: 5/14/2022 Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Rhymezone

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I Am Anaya

Date: 8/22/2022 6:27:00 PM

Your cake quest Odessey ends with all the exciting trimmings! "A lemon cake made with real lemons and grated lemon skin," I must try this! I enjoyed vicariously!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2022 10:18:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this fun true cake write. This one is the ending to the cake story. I do not know if you read the first one or not. The cake did turn out great. I found it at Wal-Mart and covered it with a thick layer of whip cream whip topping. It was to die for. Enjoy!!! Let me know if you try it and if you like it. OK??? Have a great/blessed day...............

Valsa George

Date: 5/15/2022 9:41:00 PM

This is a lovely read ! Soothing is the ambiance ! Congratulations dear Paula on your win ! Stay blessed....

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/16/2022 9:10:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my cake journey write. Have a great/blessed day...............

Len Gasun

Date: 5/15/2022 8:09:00 PM

I love reading your cake journey's ending story dear friend Paula. So delightfully beautiful, sweet and romantic poem. Great and happy ending. Big Congrats on your win and this fantasic write! Thanks for sharing. Have a blessed and happy new week! Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/16/2022 9:08:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my fun write with a happy ending. It was some journey. Have a great/blessed day...............

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/15/2022 6:32:00 PM

Lovely poem, Paula. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/16/2022 9:06:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like fun write. Have a great/blessed day...............

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/15/2022 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this sweet well-penned poem, Paula. Blessings

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/16/2022 9:05:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this fun spring lemon cake write. Have a great/blessed day...............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/15/2022 10:01:00 AM

This is such a sweet and happy spring poem, Paula! Congratulations on your win, Evelyn

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/16/2022 9:04:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this happy spring write. Have a great/blessed day...............

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/15/2022 9:02:00 AM

BIG congrats on your win, Paula. Beautiful images from the heart of spring.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/16/2022 9:03:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed day...............

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/14/2022 1:15:00 PM

Paula, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet and creative poem, makes me want some lemon cake!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/15/2022 7:51:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your contest with my lemon wedding cake. Glad you like this write. The lemon cake was pretty and was great to eat. Wish I had some to send you. Have a great/blessed~day/week............

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/5/2022 10:44:00 AM

Nicely penned "A lemon cake made with real lemons and grated lemon skin,"

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/6/2022 9:17:00 AM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you like this one. The lemon cake looked pretty and was wonderful to eat. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.............

Joseph May

Date: 4/28/2022 7:14:00 PM

A lovely ending with the 'lemon cake dressed in soft white frosting', Wonderful writ write Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/29/2022 12:04:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you like the ending. The lemon cake was wonderful all dressed in soft white frosting. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 4/27/2022 3:26:00 AM

An unusual theme but it creates a lovely journey...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2022 8:47:00 AM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you like these 2 writes about the crazy yet lovely Cake Journey. The lemon cake was wonderful. It was a beautiful garden wedding on 4/23. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Michael Tor

Date: 4/26/2022 6:56:00 PM

Wonderful piece Paula really nicely written. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2022 8:45:00 AM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you like these 2 writes about the crazy Cake Journey. It was a beautiful garden wedding on 4/23. The lemon cake was wonderful. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/26/2022 6:44:00 PM

Best wishes to the happy couple as well as their parents. Paula, this is a lovely poem and well done. I liked the way everything turned out. Thank you so much about the soupmail and sorry that I missed this wonderful poem

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2022 8:42:00 AM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you like these 2 writes about the Cake Journey. Everything worked out wonderful on Saturday and with the lemon cake they wanted. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/26/2022 5:15:00 PM

Hello paula, oh, part 2 of this poem is beautifully done. I like it. Everything worked out. fine. Blessings my friend. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/27/2022 12:23:00 PM

Hello Paula, I am glad that everything worked out fine. I hope you had a great time at the wedding. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2022 8:39:00 AM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you like this 2 part write. Everything worked out on the wedding day and with the lemon cake they wanted. Have a blessed day writing away with hugs.................

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/26/2022 4:10:00 PM

This was a joy to read! Congratulations. It is so nice to read about. Great to find the Lemon cake. Thanks for sharing :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2022 8:36:00 AM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you found this a joy to read. It was a beautiful Spring Garden Day/Wedding with the lemon cake they wanted. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Bill Baker

Date: 4/26/2022 3:52:00 PM

Congratulations to the happy couple and their parents. I liked to way everything worked out, Paula, and the lovely follow-up poem. Thanks for sharing and for the soup mail. Your mail is welcome anytime. :-) Hugs, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2022 8:33:00 AM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you liked these 2 writes. Everything worked out. It was a beautiful Spring Garden Day/Wedding. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Constance La France

Date: 4/26/2022 2:47:00 PM

Paula, this is a lovely poem and well done, nothing more beautiful than a Spring wedding ~Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2022 8:29:00 AM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you enjoyed part 1 and part 2. It was a beautiful Spring Garden Wedding. Flowers were everywhere. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/26/2022 1:41:00 PM

Hey , Paula. This is so pitically delicate and well written. Yes I did read part one. Did you get married? Or is this fictional. Please soupmail a thick headed poet.))) Yours, Pangie

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/27/2022 12:53:00 PM

Thank you for clearing things up. I am n the dense Side sometimes.)) You are a tremendous friend to the bride. It’s another 80 degree day. And now, because of you, am dying for lemon cake. THE POWER OF PAULA’S POETRY))))) Yours, Pangie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2022 8:26:00 AM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you enjoyed part 1 and part 2. I was in my best girlfriends wedding. I did her flowers and her cake. I was gone over the weekend. The beautiful garden wedding was 4/23. Have a blessed day writing away.................

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/26/2022 11:39:00 AM

Aw, Paula, this is so sweet...in more ways than one! I enjoyed it so much.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/26/2022 1:03:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. I hope you read and enjoyed Part One, "The Cake Journey" on 3/21/2022. I could not post this one before the wedding. The wedding was this past week end, 4/23. This one is Part Two and the Ending. Have a blessed day writing away.................