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The Butterfly

As she drinks nectar from a flower, sweetness from heaven falls like dew anointed with a gentle rain amidst sun showers she appears as if on cue
Lifting her wings she lands on a Zinnia beneath a tinted sky of April blue flight of fancy fanning fast, fabulous marvel, she is beauty true on true
Being sent from up above, fragile like pretty stained glass her colors shine in the bright sunlight so heavenly as I walk in the grass
Then she starts to land flying down and landing right on me, after taking a short rest she is off flying away with her friend the big bee

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Date: 4/9/2025 1:38:00 PM
she is beauty true on true… fragile like pretty stained glass…cute last line…the moments!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/10/2025 11:10:00 AM
Great to see you here. Thanks for stopping over. Glad you enjoyed my fun "The Butterfly" write. It was a enjoy writing about my butterfly and her bee friend. Have a wonderful/blessed spring day writing away.........
Date: 4/9/2025 12:06:00 PM
Love this light airy poem! The rhymes are flawless and beautiful! Thanks for sharing Paula!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/10/2025 11:08:00 AM
Great to see you here. Thanks for stopping over. Glad you love my fun "The Butterfly" write. I enjoyed bringing this write about a butterfly and her bee friend to life. Have a wonderful/blessed spring day writing away.........
Date: 4/8/2025 9:27:00 PM
Oh, beautiful Paula... ! This thing of beauty when lands on us, it is so thrilling. But it won't rest there for long as it has company and a wider world. All the Best in the contest. Love and hugs.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/9/2025 11:45:00 AM
Great to see you here. Thanks for stopping over and for your All the Best in the contest. Glad you found "The Butterfly" write to be, Oh, beautiful. I love butterflies and they are so very pretty. Have a wonderful/blessed spring day writing away.........
Date: 4/8/2025 8:43:00 PM
Wonderful addition to Mystic Rose's poem Paula. If this is for the contest this a good one. Best of luck
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/9/2025 11:43:00 AM
Great to see you here. Thanks for stopping over and for your Best of luck. Glad you found "The Butterfly" write to be a, Wonderful addition. It was so much fun writing about this little butterfly. Have a wonderful/blessed spring day writing away.........
Date: 4/8/2025 10:41:00 AM
Paula, there is rhyme and rhythm in your couplets, alliteration and word pairing. Serious poetry and a cute ending with the bumble bee, I can see them together! Faving ~
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/8/2025 12:07:00 PM
Great to see you here. Thanks for stopping over. Glad you enjoyed my fun "The Butterfly" write. I enjoyed writing this about a butterfly and her bee friend. I see FAV??? Thanks a million. You made my day a very happy one. Have a wonderful/blessed spring day writing away.........
Date: 4/8/2025 9:57:00 AM
That was cute. Best wishes for the contest
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/8/2025 10:34:00 AM
Great to see you here. Thanks for stopping over and for your Best wishes for the contest. Glad you found "The Butterfly" write to be, cute. I enjoyed writing about this butterfly. Have a wonderful/blessed spring day writing away.........
Date: 4/8/2025 9:55:00 AM
- What a beautiful poem, Paula :) - I don't know, but if it's for the contest I wish you luck :) - A gem :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/8/2025 10:28:00 AM
Great to see you here. Thanks for stopping over and for your wish of luck. Glad you found "The Butterfly" write to be, a beautiful poem. It was fun to bring to life. Hugs... Have a wonderful/blessed spring day writing away.........
Date: 4/8/2025 9:49:00 AM
The Butterfly~Date Written:4/8/205~Written By Human Poet....
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