The Butterflies Dance - the Whitney Style

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~The Butterflies Dance~ (A Double Whitney) The sun is So warm and nice There is cheer Everywhere cause Spring has sprung One more time and Winter so cold is now gone The robins Have returned and The hibiscus And the roses Bloom again To my delight Now I see butterflies dance. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 May.24.2016 ~Author's Notes: The "Whitney" is a syllabic poetry form or style, that was created by Betty Ann Whitney.The "Whitney" is also known as an American Asian Poem.

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Gary Bateman

Date: 5/26/2016 7:39:00 AM

Dear One "D" -- This beautifully-rendered write is radiant, warm, and delightful for sure. TR/FAV!! Cheers and Best, "G"

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/31/2016 4:35:00 PM

Hi there again G!:)Thank you ever so kindly my very dear friend Gary,for stopping by again n' commenting so beautifully on my poem here.I'm so glad that you like this one about and in the Whitney style:)I deeply appreciate you in all and all your very kind visits, and of course the very awesome comments, the 7/ fav's, and all that you always leave me behind when you visit me.You're always very kind to me,G!Really hope all is going well with your writes and book, G.Thanks so much again for your support and all:)Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid as always!Take very good care of each other forever,okay,G. Spill ink!Best to you always!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))D.