Premiere Contest WinnerThe Bronzed Edge of Twilight

I'd bloomed from the warm glow in his eyes.
He had been my sunlight when darkness loomed.
His arms protected me, for he was my safe haven,
but too soon, the light faded from his hazel eyes,
and his voice, a gasp when drawing a breath.

His life was pilfered by Death, the morbid thief.
Stolen from us were Utopian days of splendor.
The painful loss is a burden I must endure,
uncertain of how I will face tomorrow alone.

I wept in silence until the bronzed edge of twilight 
chased prisms of light from pastel skies.
A shroud of gloom veiled the wound in my heart
as I felt the gatekeeper gently touch my arm.

Layers of cold black earth now separated us.
I still held the red rose I'd brought for his coffin.
Streaks of tears washed blush from my cheeks,
while I shivered in fear without his hand to hold.

I was years older since morning had dawned,
wilting like the spray of lilies, heads drooping. 
They were withered and dying, their beauty lost.
Once vibrant and sweet, their fragrance fading,
they lie on a grave for which they were grown.

On alabaster marble, my finger traced his name,
wishing love's affliction could somehow be rescinded.
I was at the impasse where life and death collide.
I stood, but left my crushed red rose on the chair,
for unable was I to whisper 'goodbye.'




February 5, 2021
Break My Heart, Why Don't Cha Contest
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh
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Allison Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 3:34 PM
many congrats Jenna on your win , poetry at its best, hugs jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 6:39 PM
This is a heart breaker for sure, I asked for a write that makes me feel something, ooh you did that, congrats Jenna on another top win, you're in great company!
Marc Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 9:31 AM
Beautiful and profound poetry ~ FAV
Logan Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 10:19 AM
Thank you very much. I appreciate the kind thoughts as well as the fav.
Mcintosh Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 7:21 AM
This is a beauty and so deserving of your win... Congrats and I am faving this. It's beautiful and inspires my heart despite the painful subject. God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
Logan Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 7:32 AM
I'm honored that you not only like this one, but have also faved it. Thank you, Gina.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Your pen was writing overtime on this one. Enjoy your win/day with blessings...................
Logan Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 7:42 PM
Sometimes I can't seem to put my pen down once it begins to fly on the page, or my fingers on the keyboard. lol Thank you very much, Paula.
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February 9, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Heartfelt words Jenna, powerful penning takes us there and back, and in the end all your colors fade to black, outstanding poem, fully deserved win, congratulations, cheers David
Logan Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 7:41 PM
Your comments are always so very welcomed. Thanks, David.
Gondolf Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 5:38 AM
This is so beautifully sad, Jenna, an exquisetly written piece. I can feel the deep emotions within. Congrats on your trophy win. Hugs.
Logan Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 8:12 AM
My sincere thanks for liking this one, John.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 9:54 PM
So gorgeous! Congratulations on your win my friend. Podium win!
Logan Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 1:17 AM
Thank you, Caren. Your comments arrive like a bouquet of roses...several at once and all so pretty.
Seeker Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 6:43 PM
A.m.a.z.i.n.g. Soulful and sorrowful. Well deserved first place Jenna! So happy I read this!
Logan Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 1:16 AM
and I'm delighted that you chose to read it and leave your great remarks, Seeker. Thanks!
Fowler Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 6:38 PM
Awesome Jenna - way to go! Congratulations on the win! Linda
Logan Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 1:15 AM
Thanks very much, Linda.
Cunningham Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 4:09 PM
Back to congratulate you on your trophy win. Well deserved too. Tom
Logan Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 1:15 AM
Thank you so much, Tom.
Ibeh Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 1:35 PM
Stunning, poignant masterpiece, Jenna:-) Heartiest congratulations on your trophy win!
Logan Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 1:14 AM
Thank you for honoring this poem in your contest, Edward. I appreciate your kind thoughts.
Koplin Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 6:35 PM
"I stood at an impasse, where life and death collide." I love this line, great job Jenna!
Logan Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 1:13 AM
Thanks for zeroing in on this line, Mark.
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February 6, 2021 at 3:18 AM
Soon it will be my wife's anniversary since her death. So I can relate to your lovely poem. ~~
Logan Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 3:36 AM
I wish for you a sense of peace to overcome your sorrow, Victor. Thank you for sharing that thought with me and for thinking these lines are 'lovely.'
Cunningham Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 11:49 AM
So sad to lose a soulmate, you captured it well in your verse Jenna. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
Logan Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Even when it's not through death, it's terribly sad. Thanks, Tom and a good weekend for you, too.
Sands Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 10:33 AM
This is so well expressed and leaves the reader feeling it deeply. Excellent Jenna. Take care! :)
Logan Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 11:06 AM
Thank you for such complimentary remarks, Heidi.
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