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The Bronzed Edge of Twilight Premiere Contest Winner

I'd bloomed from the warm glow in his eyes. He had been my sunlight when darkness loomed. His arms protected me, for he was my safe haven, but too soon, the light faded from his hazel eyes, and his voice, a gasp when drawing a breath. His life was pilfered by Death, the morbid thief. Stolen from us were Utopian days of splendor. The painful loss is a burden I must endure, uncertain of how I will face tomorrow alone. I wept in silence until the bronzed edge of twilight chased prisms of light from pastel skies. A shroud of gloom veiled the wound in my heart as I felt the gatekeeper gently touch my arm. Layers of cold black earth now separated us. I still held the red rose I'd brought for his coffin. Streaks of tears washed blush from my cheeks, while I shivered in fear without his hand to hold. I was years older since morning had dawned, wilting like the spray of lilies, heads drooping. They were withered and dying, their beauty lost. Once vibrant and sweet, their fragrance fading, they lie on a grave for which they were grown. On alabaster marble, my finger traced his name, wishing love's affliction could somehow be rescinded. I was at the impasse where life and death collide. I stood, but left my crushed red rose on the chair, for unable was I to whisper 'goodbye.' February 5, 2021 Break My Heart, Why Don't Cha Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 4/27/2021 3:34:00 PM
many congrats Jenna on your win , poetry at its best, hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/26/2021 6:39:00 PM
This is a heart breaker for sure, I asked for a write that makes me feel something, ooh you did that, congrats Jenna on another top win, you're in great company!
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Date: 2/14/2021 9:31:00 AM
Beautiful and profound poetry ~ FAV
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/14/2021 10:19:00 AM
Thank you very much. I appreciate the kind thoughts as well as the fav.
Date: 2/12/2021 7:21:00 AM
This is a beauty and so deserving of your win... Congrats and I am faving this. It's beautiful and inspires my heart despite the painful subject. God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/12/2021 7:32:00 AM
I'm honored that you not only like this one, but have also faved it. Thank you, Gina.
Date: 2/9/2021 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Your pen was writing overtime on this one. Enjoy your win/day with blessings...................
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/11/2021 7:42:00 PM
Sometimes I can't seem to put my pen down once it begins to fly on the page, or my fingers on the keyboard. lol Thank you very much, Paula.
Date: 2/9/2021 12:36:00 PM
Heartfelt words Jenna, powerful penning takes us there and back, and in the end all your colors fade to black, outstanding poem, fully deserved win, congratulations, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/11/2021 7:41:00 PM
Your comments are always so very welcomed. Thanks, David.
Date: 2/9/2021 5:38:00 AM
This is so beautifully sad, Jenna, an exquisetly written piece. I can feel the deep emotions within. Congrats on your trophy win. Hugs.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/9/2021 8:12:00 AM
My sincere thanks for liking this one, John.
Date: 2/8/2021 9:54:00 PM
So gorgeous! Congratulations on your win my friend. Podium win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/9/2021 1:17:00 AM
Thank you, Caren. Your comments arrive like a bouquet of roses...several at once and all so pretty.
Date: 2/8/2021 6:43:00 PM
A.m.a.z.i.n.g. Soulful and sorrowful. Well deserved first place Jenna! So happy I read this!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/9/2021 1:16:00 AM
and I'm delighted that you chose to read it and leave your great remarks, Seeker. Thanks!
Date: 2/8/2021 6:38:00 PM
Awesome Jenna - way to go! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/9/2021 1:15:00 AM
Thanks very much, Linda.
Date: 2/8/2021 4:09:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your trophy win. Well deserved too. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/9/2021 1:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tom.
Date: 2/8/2021 1:35:00 PM
Stunning, poignant masterpiece, Jenna:-) Heartiest congratulations on your trophy win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/9/2021 1:14:00 AM
Thank you for honoring this poem in your contest, Edward. I appreciate your kind thoughts.
Date: 2/7/2021 6:35:00 PM
"I stood at an impasse, where life and death collide." I love this line, great job Jenna!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/9/2021 1:13:00 AM
Thanks for zeroing in on this line, Mark.
Date: 2/6/2021 3:18:00 AM
Soon it will be my wife's anniversary since her death. So I can relate to your lovely poem. ~~
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/6/2021 3:36:00 AM
I wish for you a sense of peace to overcome your sorrow, Victor. Thank you for sharing that thought with me and for thinking these lines are 'lovely.'
Date: 2/5/2021 11:49:00 AM
So sad to lose a soulmate, you captured it well in your verse Jenna. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2021 1:03:00 PM
Even when it's not through death, it's terribly sad. Thanks, Tom and a good weekend for you, too.
Date: 2/5/2021 10:33:00 AM
This is so well expressed and leaves the reader feeling it deeply. Excellent Jenna. Take care! :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2021 11:06:00 AM
Thank you for such complimentary remarks, Heidi.

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