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The Bridge

The Bridge Trees clothed in blazing yellows and flaming reds reach towards the sky in gentle supplication, preparing for their naked winter. Fat orange pumpkins are last gasp of fallow fields. Warm, pleasant days give way to frosty nights. Apples give of themselves to make the sweet nectar that warms us. Bushy tailed rodents squirrel away nuts and bears grow fat in anticipation of the long cold season ahead. Time slows and matures as winter approaches. Fall is that short bridge between frenetic summer and still winter. I am in the Fall Crossing that short bridge Winter grows closer.

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Date: 10/30/2016 5:44:00 PM
What wonderful description in your haibun I have enjoyed the challenge of writing this form in a couple of poems... I have learned so so much since I joined soup in Feb 2014!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 10/30/2016 6:42:00 PM
Thank you Jan. This is the only Haibun I have written because it is difficult for me. Oliver
Date: 1/11/2016 5:10:00 AM
A fabulous Haibun, Oliver. Great imagery!
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/11/2016 5:17:00 AM
Thanks Cona. Oliver
Date: 11/8/2015 1:14:00 PM
Hi Oliver, you paint a pretty path. However, I live in South Texas, where the bridge is long between all season, a few years back we forgot what winter felt like. Love the style above. creative . LINDA
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 11/8/2015 8:26:00 PM
Hello Linda, I lived in two different parts of Texas many years ago in the Air Force. The weather was too hot and dry for me. Glad you liked the Haibun. Thanks Oliver

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