Premiere Contest WinnerThe Bridge

The bridge... long
every step rang in my ears
like a horse on a cobbled street
The rain was cold, hard, and prickly
I look down into the rushing black water
My mind vacant on an ever-darkening night
She was miles away and the room was empty but for her
the door I closed, silent as I walked into tomorrow

White foam from the river woke my thoughts
Its rippling waters flow without care or need,
pounding speckled stones into sand
I paused, filled my lungs,
the only sound is a deep sigh,
I lifted my collar to hold back the rain 
moved on into the night, never looking back
to a time when there was a streaking flame of light
in a dark sky filled with contradictions and conflict
Still wondering, if the next day would be as dark
as the night I realized, she was already gone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Smith Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 8:21 AM
Sure thought he would take the plunge, well done Frederic, congratulations...
Wood Avatar
August 15, 2017 at 3:13 PM
This is a sober gem Frederic. Sad, but wonderfully written. Reading this is a treat, it is so smooth it is all about the story unfolding not the form or meter. Excellent!
Barden Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 4:50 AM
Wonderfully poignant and melancholy - exquisite write, my friend, and well-deserved win - congrats! :-)
Austin Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Looking back and looking forward in a very sensitive way. Like this one. Congrats on the selection. daver
Black Blacharczyk Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 8:00 PM
Hoping for the beauty of nature to soften the blow. Well written
Andresen Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 3:51 PM
- A touching .... but well written poem Frederic - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Parker Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 1:03 PM
thank you for the simple act of kindness in reading and commenting on my poems, in doing so you have given joy
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