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The Bridge Premiere Contest Winner

The bridge... long every step rang in my ears like a horse on a cobbled street The rain was cold, hard, and prickly I look down into the rushing black water My mind vacant on an ever-darkening night She was miles away and the room was empty but for her the door I closed, silent as I walked into tomorrow White foam from the river woke my thoughts Its rippling waters flow without care or need, pounding speckled stones into sand I paused, filled my lungs, the only sound is a deep sigh, I lifted my collar to hold back the rain moved on into the night, never looking back to a time when there was a streaking flame of light in a dark sky filled with contradictions and conflict Still wondering, if the next day would be as dark as the night I realized, she was already gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/16/2017 8:21:00 AM
Sure thought he would take the plunge, well done Frederic, congratulations...
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Date: 8/15/2017 3:13:00 PM
This is a sober gem Frederic. Sad, but wonderfully written. Reading this is a treat, it is so smooth it is all about the story unfolding not the form or meter. Excellent!
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Date: 8/14/2017 4:50:00 AM
Wonderfully poignant and melancholy - exquisite write, my friend, and well-deserved win - congrats! :-)
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Date: 6/2/2016 1:38:00 PM
Looking back and looking forward in a very sensitive way. Like this one. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 5/30/2016 8:00:00 PM
Hoping for the beauty of nature to soften the blow. Well written
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Date: 12/15/2013 3:51:00 PM
- A touching .... but well written poem Frederic - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 12/16/2013 1:03:00 PM
thank you for the simple act of kindness in reading and commenting on my poems, in doing so you have given joy

Book: Shattered Sighs