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The Breeze

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the breeze is but the wind in calm meditation

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Deb M

Date: 3/6/2024 12:56:00 PM

Simple and Truly beautiful Sara! Debx

Bill Baker

Date: 3/4/2024 6:34:00 PM

You nailed it, I could feel the pleasant breeze. Great Haiku, Sara. Or should I say (Queen). :-) Bill

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 3/4/2024 5:45:00 PM

Nice monoku, my friend.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/4/2024 5:54:00 PM

thank you, my poet friend. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Daniel Caplin

Date: 3/4/2024 7:14:00 AM

I'm already there , I can picture it so vividly in my minds eye , it's something I've always felt , but was never able to express , beautiful words as always . Daniel

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/4/2024 5:53:00 PM

thank you for your visit and for sharing your mind's eye thoughts. Splendid. Have a great evening, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/4/2024 5:25:00 AM

- Sounds wonderful, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/4/2024 5:53:00 PM

thanks, Anne-Lise! have a great evening, Sara

Mat Ignacio

Date: 3/3/2024 7:19:00 PM

a peaceful thought for the day -

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/4/2024 4:28:00 AM

thanks, Mat. Appreciate your visit. enjoy your day, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/3/2024 6:01:00 PM

Interesting. I enjoy reading this .

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/4/2024 4:28:00 AM

thanks, Hilda. Grateful for your visit and have a pleasant day, Sara