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The Brainstorm of An Imperfect Mind

Her mind was tainted by loss. Wounded beyond mending; unable to be restored- too flawed to be strengthened. Her intellect was imperfect. Blemished by the pain she endured in her youth which carried into the prime of her adulthood. She knew not how to heal herself, nor how to repair her insecure mindset that was encompassed by obscure thoughts that tainted her every thought. Brainwaves of agony bestowed much torment that led to pain of the physical matter. She suffered in silence as all the people she loved were jovial. They told her time would heal. EVEN I TOLD HER that bright days would eventually arrive. She sought loneliness, though wept when by herself. It was evident that nothing on God’s green earth would be able to ameliorate her diseased mind. In the morning she danced with angels and at night she wrestled with demons. Though I was conflicted on how to bestow hope unto her, I tried my best. Brave yet cowardly- strong yet feeble. SHE WAS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL WOMAN I WILL EVER KNOW. And… I never got to say goodbye. Brainstorm Poetry Contest John Hamilton October 20, 2018

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Date: 10/28/2018 6:16:00 AM
Ouch that hurts. Laura, this is heart wrenching. Congratulations on your win, Kai
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Date: 10/26/2018 3:38:00 AM
- A deep moving story, Laura ... I love the end (I do not know if it's from reality ... but may be :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/25/2018 8:17:00 PM
This is such a beautiful, lonely, haunting poem. Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Very well deserved. My best. Deb
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Date: 10/25/2018 12:55:00 PM
Very touching write Laura, congrats on a great win, little consolation...considering
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