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The Boy

The distant flash of guns, like fireworks in Yorkshire Dales, a November, long past; soon followed by deep rumbling, thunder that usually precedes rain, but not today. The boy, marching, singing with his pals moving ever further from Tipperary. Wherever that was. Soon, ragged men start passing, arriving from where he's going. The boy thinks he sees a friend it's hard to tell; there's just a gaping hole below the eyes the man groping for a dangling mandible trying to reassemble a face; dying questioning eyes meet. A growling sergeant moves them on, "forward, boys." The singing stops eyes dart from side to side the proud upright march becoming a bowed, furtive walk. Tomorrow, the boy will take his gun and march across as un-yet fields of scarlet poppies towards the enemy; or so he's told. He will never pull the trigger, he will not have time. GUNS Poetry Contest: Placed 1st. Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco Date wrote: 25-04-2021

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Date: 7/11/2021 3:29:00 AM
Congratulations, and excellent post, Terry. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. I am very proud of you. The descriptive excellence is lovely and sends terrific images. The theme of stands out, and the tone moves the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, and God's richest grace and blessings to you always. –Professor, Ambassador, Dr. Joseph S. Spence Sr. (Epulaeryu Master)!
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/12/2021 1:04:00 AM
Thank you, sir, for your very valued comments.
Date: 7/9/2021 1:13:00 PM
Poignant write.
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/10/2021 1:21:00 AM
Thank you, James, for the visit and kind comment.
Date: 7/8/2021 9:19:00 AM
The poem The boys, I like that one. In my imagination I placed myself at the very scene. It was quite sobering.
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/9/2021 12:55:00 AM
Thank you, Kirkland, for your kind comments; all wars are terrible; I tried to convey the horror and futility.
Date: 5/18/2021 10:48:00 AM
I love your very moving poem, Terry. Congratulations!
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/21/2021 1:15:00 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and kind comments
Date: 5/11/2021 6:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Great poem about the horrors of war.
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/12/2021 12:34:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer, I appreciate your warm comment.
Date: 5/11/2021 3:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a story/write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/12/2021 12:36:00 AM
Thank you, Paula, I am so glad you enjoyed my poem if you can truly say enjoy given the subject matter. I appreciate your comments very much, have a blessed day yourself.
Date: 5/11/2021 5:50:00 AM
Hi Terry, congrats and very nicely done. Hits you straight in the gut(and the jaw). I very much liked the underlying intensity throughout the poem. Best Wishes Anthony.
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/11/2021 6:56:00 AM
Hi Anthony, I am truly honored with the win, thank you so much!
Date: 5/11/2021 5:44:00 AM
So sad... God bless you and congrats. Love and prayers, Gina
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/11/2021 6:57:00 AM
Thank you Gina, God bless you too.
Date: 5/10/2021 8:37:00 PM
Heart-rending! Congratulations!
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/11/2021 12:40:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 4/25/2021 8:43:00 AM
Terry, this is a poignant, heart-rending piece of work, but so beautiful in its own way. I enjoyed it. Good writing, my friend, and thanks for sharing it. GL in the contest.
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/25/2021 11:59:00 PM
Thank you for your comments and encouragement, I am still learning.

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