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The Book According To St Lovejoy 1:3 - Part 2

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"The Book According to St Lovejoy 1:3 (Part 2)" 3. 3 are the fathers, sons, and mothers lost in time 1.2.3. 3 are the daughters 1.2.3. 3 are the mother, the child, a lone sister lost at Sea 1.2.3. 3 is the mother, father, and the loved child who sits all alone 1.2.3 3 is the dignity, grace, loyalty to hold tight to the will to keep walking forward in faith, hope and love with thee. 3 is the story nailed to The Cross 3 is the pain 3 is the loss 3 is the belief that what we love most, is delivered back home safely by the Father, Son and Holy Ghost 3 is the number that is divine 3 is the number that is always mine. 3 is the time in the morning that I confess 3 is the moment of search, beseeching unrest 3 it would seem, is the number that has been blessed. 3.Is the Number 1.2.3. (Lovejoy-Burton/2017 Dec) (1) The The / “Soul Mining” https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IkzwnBqjRYg

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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 12/16/2017 2:12:00 PM

“I was the lion who forced you to join with Aravis. I was the cat who comforted you among the houses of the dead. I was the lion who drove the jackals from you while you slept. I was the lion who gave the horses the new strength of fear for the last mill so that you should reach King Lune in time. And I was the lion you do not remember who pushed the boat in which you lay, a child near death, so that it came to shore where a man sat, wakeful at midnight, to receive you.” C.S. Lewis

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 12/16/2017 2:08:00 PM

"“It isn't Narnia, you know," sobbed Lucy. "It's you. We shan't meet you there. And how can we live, never meeting you?" "But you shall meet me, dear one," said Aslan. "Are -are you there too, Sir?" said Edmund. "I am," said Aslan. "But there I have another name. You must learn to know me by that name. This was the very reason why you were brought to Narnia, that by knowing me here for a little, you may know me better there.” ? C.S. Lewis, The Voyage of the Dawn Treader

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/16/2017 6:39:00 AM

There're a few "magical numbers"... and 3 is definitely one of them... Your mind is very creative...Enjoyed it...All the best Leanne

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 12/16/2017 1:45:00 PM

Thank's Arturo. As other people have recommended it's a bit all over the place and needs to be refined. I don't take direction well & I sometimes don't have time for punctuation!...But I'm obviously writing for a reason and that is a good thing. I love writing. No one will take that away from me EVER - it is all mine. I will try to improve my stories, they are here for no other reason than for my daughter, my family and the people I meet who are of significance to my stories, possibly in my stories, to read.