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The Boatman's Song 4/ Many

Indra knew this very well that 
What ever may be the immense charms of heaven
Hidden in it’s never ending joys, songs and pleasures  
There was no match with that of the earthly happiness
Which is found like a blooming Rose bud
Opening its charms and joyful petals of fragrance and beauty
Surrounded all around with thrones like 
Pains, sufferings and sorrows of life
But once you possess it, facing the piercing thorns
You bloom in a rare heavenly joy and pleasure
Which even can not be dreamed of by those
Who dwells in the never ending and fading joys of heaven 

Indra found that there was no way to stop
The throbbing heart of Urveshi for that boatman
And for his heart touching melodies, 
Floating both on earth and heaven

Finding no way out, He thought to put a condition
So that Urveshi may not go finding out 
That a visit to earth could end her permanent stay in heaven
For ever and for ever without any returning 

Indra cautioned Urveshi 
That if she is determined to go to earth
She may go to listen the melodies of that boatman
But she should not go close to that boatman 
And should not touch his body 
Or else, she would not be able to return to heaven
As her single touch to any human would make her 
An Earthly body, which would be subject to
Life and death and mortality 

He again tried to convince Urveshi
Your love for the boatman and his earthly body
Can bring an end of your tenure in heaven
Still, if you decide to be a part of that life
I will not stop you to visit the earth, But
You will miss for ever and for ever, your heavenly abode
And your, never ending joys and pleasures of heaven
The moment you will adopt the earthly pleasure
You will be doomed for a normal life and death
As it is availed by humans living on earth

Think Urveshi think again
Can you dare to miss the heavenly comforts?
Its  non-ending joys, songs, mirth and pleasures
Where pains and sufferings are not even known
Can you really afford to live on earth, like a normal human?

Where one faces only pains and sufferings 
Throughout his life and ends one day in spite of all strife’s


Ravindra 
	                               to continue......			
				
Kanpur   India 7th January 2010  
* Apsara (A Nymph dancer of heaven in the court of Indra as per Hindu Mythology
* Indra (The Lord of Heaven as per Hindu mythology
* Urveshi (One of the beloved Apsaras of Indra 
* Saraswati (Goddess of knowledge, music & arts)
* Jungle (Forest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/3/2013 12:13:00 AM
Hello Ravindra, .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA
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Date: 10/28/2013 9:56:00 AM
It is with honor that I read this amazing poem, Ravindra......you are such a wonderful story teller. One of many !
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 10/28/2013 10:38:00 AM
You have a very long life Carrie. I was remembering you few hours back. I feel myself honored that I have such wonderful Poet friends like you my friend. More on your Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 1/29/2010 12:31:00 PM
I anticipate with pleasure reading onto #5. What a sad decision she must make. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 1/17/2010 8:14:00 AM
Hmmmmm ...non ending anything can become torture yes? Light & Love
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Date: 1/16/2010 9:55:00 AM
Much for the reader to reflect on in this poem. What an inspirational poem. The questions work well. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Karen
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Date: 1/14/2010 10:55:00 AM
How compelling that she is warned against "touching" the Boatman in the physical sense, Ravindra. You create a sense of anticipation in the reader as to where this series will lead next. Excellent writing in all the portions I have read so far! Much love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/13/2010 10:25:00 AM
The last stanza seems to agree with the Christian faith\.Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 1/10/2010 8:26:00 AM
Thanks for your welcome comments today Rvindra.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/10/2010 6:10:00 AM
I love the suggestions that suffering the thorns is what makes the rose bloom unbelieveably beautifully. I am moving on to the next segmant. Lainie
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Date: 1/7/2010 7:54:00 AM
What will she do? Can't wait to see! Off to five! Love Light Patty
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