the blues

blue all shades shadow dance from light through dark night

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2023 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/20/2023 8:54:00 AM

Thank you Sara, glad you liked it x

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2023 2:11:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful Lanterne in Joseph May's contest, D.D. :) - hugs

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/20/2023 8:54:00 AM

Appreciated Anne-Lise, glad you liked it x

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/19/2023 8:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "the blues" is a creative Lanterne write. Love the color blue but not blue times. Have a blessed day/week......................

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/19/2023 11:02:00 AM

Thanks Paula, glad you liked it x

Joseph May

Date: 11/18/2023 3:10:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Nicely done

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/18/2023 3:11:00 AM

Thanks Joseph, I'm working in impressing you for a top spot. I'll keep at it :)

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 2:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win loved reading this

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/18/2023 2:42:00 AM

Thank you Ink, congratulations to you also x

Mat Ignacio

Date: 11/15/2023 8:23:00 PM

Nicely said - myself, I see a "night" cap (or hat, if you prefer)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/15/2023 10:34:00 PM

That's sweet, yes a night cap is there haha. Thank you :)

Silent One

Date: 11/15/2023 3:19:00 PM

Nice.. looks like a lantern...

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/15/2023 3:26:00 PM

Stare at it a little longer and you can see a turtle, a terrine, a Christmas tree - or even a chocolate pizza slice straight out of the oven :) thanks for your comment :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/15/2023 2:10:00 PM

this form of poetry is growing on me, thanks to you. I may try creating one in a couple of days. Anyway, this is well penned. I enjoyed it...have a pleasant evening, Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/15/2023 2:35:00 PM

Thank you - it's a bit like roulette seeing what occurs, definitely worth trying. Thanks for your kind words x

Lin Lane

Date: 11/15/2023 11:23:00 AM

That's a good one, Dilly. I think I'll enter one.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/15/2023 12:20:00 PM

Thanks Lin, they are cute and adaptable. John's is the best I've seen so far. Good luck!

Ink Empress

Date: 11/15/2023 10:55:00 AM

Ah i love this cute form, and you’ve done very well, ive written few and now im confused which one i should post lol. Such real life issues i have. If this is for the contest goodluck dear DD, loved it

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/15/2023 11:05:00 AM

Thank you! Yes I decided on a whim to enter this one. It was filling up fast as accepts old and new but I might write a better one before it closes. Good luck with yours x

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/15/2023 10:47:00 AM

- Lovely shadings, D.D. :) - Gl. in the contest :) - hugs

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/15/2023 10:48:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise - I appreciate your kind words. This form was fun to play with x