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The Blue of Yours

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I opened my eyes There you appeared Out of thin air Like a dream I conjured you From the depths of my soul Waving the keys That unlock the doors To the labyrinth Of my mind My eyes diving Into the blue of yours Seeking answers What happened to us What went wrong I loved you You loved me Was it not enough AP: 3rd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on December 29, 2018 for contest ULTIMATE 2018 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Paris-Maree Boreham

Date: 1/2/2019 9:05:00 AM

Thank You for sharing Line Gauthier, good write, Much love Paris :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/2/2019 11:22:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Parie-Maree.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/30/2018 6:57:00 PM

Simple question, penetrates the labyrinth. So well-penned, Line! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/30/2018 7:20:00 PM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/29/2018 10:18:00 PM

Line, you are on a roll! This is gorgeous!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/29/2018 10:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, PS. Most appreciated.

Carole Duet

Date: 12/29/2018 2:32:00 PM

I love this, Line. So very full of love and emotion. FAVED too!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/29/2018 7:14:00 PM

Thank you so much, Carole. Most appreciated.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/29/2018 11:53:00 AM

Oh so well expressed. I can feel it. Well done! :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/29/2018 7:14:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/29/2018 11:14:00 AM

Your imagery and metaphorical way of expressing these feelings make this an ultimate lovely poem. "Waving the keys that unlock the doors to the labyrinth of my mind." Wow! Line, really nice.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/29/2018 7:14:00 PM

Thank you so much, Caren. Most appreciated.