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The Blade, Abiding

You grasp "goodbye" like a dagger,

Knuckle-white heart squeezing the last drip of blood from your resolve

As you drag the jagged word across my throat,

One pitied kiss upon each eye to clot the wound, and yet ...

I smile, watching our memories puddle on the floor - an emotion undefined,

For you, my love, have saved me ... the trouble.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Bangalee Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 11:15 PM
the LOVE touches softly the veins of water/// beautiful poem penned
Barden Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 4:36 PM
Thank you so very much, Mahtab, that means a lot to me - I worked very hard on the imagery and emotion in this one, and I'm so pleased that it touched your heart. Blessings, My Friend! :-)
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