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The Black Widow

She offers with those seducing eyes Draws me in with hot, sexy sighs Compliments for my clever rhymes Feels me lonely.. says now's the time Wrong seems right.. is that a crime I've arrived I've arrived The Black Widow behind her door So many men have knocked before In evening shadows.. after late Not one of them did ever escape She intoxicates like Fredrick's store Enticing bait Enticing bait If she touches me I'll be paralyzed My brain will numb, I'll buy her lies Her spun web will have me wrapped Those alluring lips, won't see the trap We'll make wild love.. then alibis Die in her lap Die in her lap Oh, that red hour glass arouses me But do I step inside.. forsake family (To be continued) ~Lyric Man Note: This is an incomplete write about the pull of seduction. For context read Lyric Man-Chapter 3. I will conclude this poem after I publish Lyric Man-Chapter 4

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Date: 8/16/2021 3:07:00 AM
Well written and so vivid
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Date: 9/17/2018 6:24:00 AM
An enigmatic web the black widow has woven, a lovely read.
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Date: 8/14/2018 12:47:00 PM
A frank and clear narration.I like it
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Date: 7/31/2018 1:07:00 PM
I love the brief clarity in which you write. You draw us in, suspending us in the web, as we wait for the story to continue.
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Date: 7/28/2018 10:32:00 AM
Hmm... A great artwork again! I say you are a lyric yourself. Keep it up! Thought to check u out today! Tati
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Date: 7/27/2018 10:45:00 PM
Lyric Man, I'm caught in the wonderment of your poetic web.. you have me breathless with anticipation for your next installment.. Love this! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/27/2018 10:12:00 AM
Masterpiece!
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Date: 7/25/2018 5:40:00 PM
the dangers of not thinking clearly is lethal -- looking forward to next installment
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Date: 7/24/2018 12:25:00 PM
Wow Lyric Man, stay away from her door and with your family. Very seductively written well.
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Date: 7/24/2018 12:46:00 AM
What a great poem, drew me in very alluring. Great!! I enjoyed it waiting for the completion.
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Date: 7/23/2018 10:42:00 PM
G'day Lyric Man … reminds me of the praying mantis and many spiders who eat their lovers once the deed is done. Definitely scary enough to be wary - Lindsay
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Date: 7/23/2018 7:11:00 PM
I can hardly wait for the rest...sheis terrifingly lethal.
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Date: 7/23/2018 5:16:00 PM
very nice , I have to find my racy poem , but i cant remmebr the title good job guy
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Date: 7/23/2018 11:50:00 AM
wow how true it is I really like the style of this poem vivid and exciting, and to be continued, a touch of unique class.....
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Date: 7/23/2018 11:27:00 AM
Well written, an alluring piece that draws you in
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Date: 7/23/2018 11:26:00 AM
I felt trapped just reading this one. :)
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Date: 7/23/2018 9:50:00 AM
Well written Lyric Man. Keep up the great writing :)
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Date: 7/23/2018 9:45:00 AM
Escape while you can!
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Date: 7/23/2018 8:30:00 AM
A very seductive spider Lyric Man...and your verse as well...^WW^
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Date: 7/23/2018 7:15:00 AM
Really compelling reading "The Black Widow" Poem. I was almost trapped too.. please be careful.!!
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Date: 7/23/2018 7:02:00 AM
Please complete. Poem is great. One thing just to mention, I myself is very much scared of a spider. The name Black Widow is a terror to me.
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Date: 7/23/2018 6:42:00 AM
You have me fully engulfed with your creative writing. Can't wait for chapter 4 :)
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Date: 7/23/2018 3:09:00 AM
This is a very interesting poem and in itself quite finished I think. I like the 'non main-stream-ness. Keep us posted on the soup about your seduction adventures, Kai
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Date: 7/22/2018 8:54:00 AM
One way or the other we are devoured by love thus we much resemble the unfortunate? lover of a Black Widow dear, Lyric!
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Date: 7/22/2018 1:12:00 AM
Don't touch that doorknob! We hang in suspense.... cool write, Lyric Man. regards, Viv
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