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The Black Tide - Act 1

Sitting on my porch I hear a ruffling scraping sound It's from the direction of the river Near the greened arable grounds I head for my truck In search of this noise so strange As I turn on it's spotlights Is my mind in disarrange For before me crawls It's like a sea of black Choking, suffocating All life in lack In full speed reverse I exit the field My spotlights again capture This black tide yield As I head into town To warn of this black spread It's as if, it knows where I am going As if, my mind it has read The full moon shines down As it beams on this dread This black attack Ebony like threads

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/16/2010 3:43:00 AM
Interesting write about the black tide...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/14/2010 5:01:00 PM
Jumping to your 2nd act Sir..........
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Date: 3/12/2010 3:07:00 PM
Eerie and spooky James.. but so intriguing and suspenseful ... enjoyed..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/12/2010 1:34:00 PM
scary like the fog movie!!
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Date: 3/12/2010 12:06:00 PM
Look out, Stephen King! You are so good at building suspense, giving us mysterious circumstances and leaving the reader breathlessly awaiting the next part. You should be writing short stories too, Highlander! Awesome! Love, Carolyn
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