The Black Rose

Black velvet was the rose that withered at my feet
Poet he was not and blood dripped from the thorns
a rose as black as night skies
a rose as black as the poets eyes-

Poet he was not and black the blood from his thorns
So dead inside was he with the black roses born
a rose as black as his icy eyes
with thorns as demeaning as his guiltless eyes-

So gifted was he with the black roses from
a rose as black as winter nights
with thorns as sharp as his thoughtless lies
black velvet was the rose on summer sighs-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 2:06 PM
Great job new friend excellent play off the Blue Rose...stick a capital R on Rose in the title. My uncle's an editor and has advised me all words 4 letters or more get CAPs in a title. So glad to see you in the winners circle! Light & Love
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July 30, 2010 at 12:37 PM
I like the eerie tone of this one. Congratulations, angel! LUv , Andrea
Brown Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 5:19 AM
Congratulations Angel on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Critcise Me". Love, Carol
Horsman Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 1:59 AM
congratulations on your win in the contest, Harry
Freeman Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 10:15 PM
Congratulations, Angel on your fifth place, Agape, Mopses
Nutter Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 6:53 PM
Excellent write, thank you for taking us on this fantasy trip with you....
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