The Black Night--------Haiku

Silently arrives, Summer's smooth, silky surprise, Snake in soil sighs. Rhymed Haiku 7/28/2021

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/28/2021 7:33:00 AM

An alliteration rhyming haiku, even snakes dont like too much heat. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/28/2021 10:42:00 AM

I like this one. Thought it was unique, Those third lines are the the hardest. Snakes do not like heat. It's hot here and the ground is dry. Never saw one, though. Panagiota

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/27/2021 12:11:00 PM

Yep, time to come out and enjoy the thaw -- I do love summer the best -- even Arizona Summers...the old bones able to move around better in the heat. Blessings!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/28/2021 10:38:00 AM

Prince de Mino, I replied last night. The reply flew away? I love AZ, was out there once. Won a trip to Spring Training...it was hot as H in Spring. Cannot imagine summer! Be careful of border hoppers bearing more Covid here. Disgusting. They do not have be vaccinated. We do? Do we have rights left as Gringos? Hugs to you and Princess Ila, Panagiota

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/27/2021 12:04:00 PM

Hello Panangiota a lovely image of summer. i am not a fan of snakes. hugs xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2021 4:14:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, it is a lovely poem. hugs xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/27/2021 3:01:00 PM

Hi Darlene. I am no snake fan either. But that’s a perfect third like for this haiku. Merci, Pangie xx