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The Bitter End of the Road

The Bitter End of the Road

Travelers coalesce as if from as dense fog 
about the grounds of the retreat.
The lodge shimmers silver-gray
amongst the changing autumn woods.
The gravel way diminishes in rearview mirrors
with the pinging sound of pebbles against
the metal horses of the day.

Civilization, ever trampling,
encroaches upon what ages ago 
had been a pristine forest, now swarms
to the Lodge’s gates: 
ants to the picnic 
late comers in search of the scraps, 
the leavings, 
of much abused nature.

Slamming car doors, buzzing cell phones,
endless chatter accosts the forest’s skirt.
Beaten paths awaited those stalwart enough
to venture in, rushing ever forward
and upward
through the crunch of fallen leaves,
the snap of branch,
the distant warble of unseen birds.
Water, when near, adds
its own rush, and babble.
But, the smaller critters seem to have vanished
tracks and spoor, trampled 
whether in reverence or disregard;
it matters not.

In our ever onward rush to enjoy,
the sounds of cricket,
cicada, the squirrels chitter,
the owls call;  
we by our mere presence 
destroy.

First Published by Poetry Quaterly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 5:53 PM
No wonder this poem was accepted for publication. It so captures nature's beauty and man's "stampede" to see the last of what is left of it...all the while remaining strongly connected to their other world...away from nature. They miss so much! Very nice,
Austin Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 10:14 AM
"The metal horses of the day" Yes, and axes and tractors, all sorts of foreign crap. Enjoyed. Love, daver
Callus Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 3:32 PM
A deep and powerful write, Debbie. Yes, even our own presence destroys, let alone the rape of our countryside, rivers, seas and forests...very often by greedy and soulless developers. Indeed, all this leaves a bitter taste! #7 // paul
Nunez Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 8:54 AM
Wow...What a compelling read...it's the sad truth of human existence...Though man was ordained to "take care and make use" of what God has provided for him, the flora, fauna, all the lush vegetation, he was and still is unable to carry out his task according to the command. Hence, "we by our own mere presence destroy" what has been entrusted to us for stewardship. Sad...Hmmn, got carried away there, Debbie. Your write urges one to contemplate...Warm Valentine hugs and smiles from the land of thousand isles...:D Kim
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 10:54 PM
A wonderfully written, powerful write, Debbie, that left me feeling saddened about the truth of our existence... :( hugs, Rhonda
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 10:47 PM
this is a deep one about what we are doing to nature. A really nicely written poem, Debs. Congrats on the publishing of it.
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