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The Big Bed

So tired I fell, my bed invited me in. Was I in my garden, the flower bed beckoned me. Date Written: 5/20/2021

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Ann Foster

Date: 5/24/2021 6:40:00 AM

Hehe... among the lovely roses... Ann

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/24/2021 8:26:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this one about my rose bed. Yes, my pink rose bed in the garden. Have a blessed day/week............

Shonima Burman

Date: 5/22/2021 11:50:00 AM

Enjoyed your poem Paula.....Hugs, Shonima

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/23/2021 9:20:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed this fun write about my The Big Bed. Have a blessed day/weekend............

Ann Foster

Date: 5/21/2021 11:14:00 AM

My dear, you are rose... God bless your day... Ann

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/21/2021 1:30:00 PM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, roses, pink roses in the garden. Have a blessed day............

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/20/2021 8:09:00 PM

Oh no ! That's not good, falling asleep in the garden. Being in those flowers though, sure felt nice and cozy, just like your bed. Your thoughts made me smile. Thank you for that. :) Brandy

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/21/2021 1:29:00 PM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this cute write. Glad I made you smile. I love to make people smile, laugh or giggle. The questions is: is The Big Bed in the garden or in a bedroom???? (Real Flowers or Bedspread) Have a blessed day............

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/20/2021 7:43:00 PM

Be careful falling asleep in the garden.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/21/2021 1:25:00 PM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this fun write. I will watch out in The Big Bed in the garden. Have a blessed day............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/20/2021 4:28:00 PM

So delightful and enjoyable, Paula. What a lovely, refreshing rest that must've provided. :D

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/21/2021 1:23:00 PM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this fun write about The Big Bed. Have a blessed day............

Jan Allison

Date: 5/20/2021 3:36:00 PM

your poem made me giggle, well penned Paula:-) hugs jan xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/21/2021 1:21:00 PM

Thanks for writing. Glad I made you giggle. That made my day. I love to make people smile, laugh or giggle. Have a blessed day............