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The Best Mum I Can Be

I come home from work, and if I’ve had a terrible day, I have little patience, and sometimes I shout in the worst way. Does that mean I’m a bad mum? no certainly not. Does that stop the thought creeping in? No not a jot. I sometimes go to the toilet, just for some space. Sometimes when they talk to me, I’m not looking at their face. Does that mean I’m a bad mum? No certainly not. Does that stop the thought creeping in? No not a jot. I feed my children nuggets and beans for their tea, Is it a special treat? no I do it weekly Does that mean I’m a bad mum? No certainly not. Does that stop the thought creeping in? No not a jot. I wanted to be a mum who is loving, calm, patient and kind But yet I find myself shouting when lost things I can’t find. Does that mean I’m a bad mum? No certainly not. Does that stop the thought creeping in? No not a jot. I sometimes miss storytime because I’ve just had enough, Who knew being a mum could be this tough? Does that mean I’m a bad mum? no certainly not. Does that stop the thought creeping in? No not a jot. Will I ever not question am I the best mum I can be? No probably not, but that’s what makes the best mum me!

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Date: 2/7/2019 3:40:00 PM
I didnt know it was your first poem posted on here.. Welcome to poetry soup.. Poetry is subjective...
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Date: 2/7/2019 5:51:00 AM
I've been there too...now I've progressed from a guilt-ridden Mum to a guilt-ridden Grandma. The best Mum isn't necessarily the perfect Mum. Life isn't Instagram. Your poem tells a tale of a loving Mum. I have a feeling writing poems could help. Look forward to reading more.
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Cheryl Davies
Date: 2/7/2019 6:17:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words. I have always loved writing poetry since I was a child and I find writing very therapeutic. I would love to write professionally for children one day. I have wrote a few rhyming Children’s picture books, and I am in the process of a few more in depth books around anger, bereavement and disability for children. One day I hope to self publish these books, but with a busy family life I’m not sure when that will be. Maybe when I’m a grandma like yourself.
Date: 2/7/2019 5:06:00 AM
It can be a struggle to be a parent especially when there is so much to balance out... you exprssed the emotions very well..
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Cheryl Davies
Date: 2/7/2019 5:42:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind comment it’s my first poem I have ever posted to a poetry site. I will be posting more soon. I know my poetry wont be to everyone’s taste, but knowing that someone connected to it is very rewarding so thank you for letting me know, I appreciate that.

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