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THE BEN!


Phonetically that’s what my name 
means in Japanese, I’ve been told. 
My name has a synonym. 
My name is in the Bible. 
Maybe one day, folks will say, 
         “Holy Ben!” 
My mentor also has my name. 
He’s on the $100 dollar bill. 
We are both very electrifying 
and I like having him in my pocket
even though I'm not gay. 
My favorite car company is Mercedes. 
      I owned one once 
that had turbo and a diesel engine. 
Just like me, our exhaust stinks and is visible. 
    I stand out in a crowd 
with my voice and bamboo flute. 
I play in parking garages and down back-alley ways. 
        Good acoustics. 
Playing Jethro Tull and Calypso 
      puts me in a trance. 
Makes it hard to sit still when all I want to do is dance. 
So, I usually dance and prance like Pan. 
I was probably Krishna in another lifetime.
But not now. I eat meat with my vegetables. 
When I play the Star Wars theme, 
                          it sends me out to Space. 
      When I play ‘In the Jungle,’ 
it sets the Beastie in me wild and free. 
     When I play ‘Amazing Grace,’ 
                           my spirit soars and flies. 
I like getting the Thumbs Up 
from the Band, and not just the crowd. 
I have stage fright, so I need a helping 
hand to make it up on stage. 
         But once I’m up, 
                I rage!
I have this recurring dream 
with me in the spotlight 
high up on a platform. 
I’m sitting on my porcelain thrown
and there's a huge crowd below. 
I have horns and a halo. 
I sometimes grunt 
when playing flute or singing songs. 
I’m not ashamed to be a poet.
Even though I don’t know It. 
Or grow It or pretend to flow It. 
I prefer to freelance out loud in song 
but the silent pen can’t be wrong. 

               I am the Ben!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Croft Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 5:13 PM
Fascinating bio.
Radice Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 3:47 PM
Your life's a long poem Ben and structured so well that we Soupers can get a feeling for your living in the present. Honest, funny and a great read. PS please try and excuse my attempts to squeeze a couple of JT tracks in my comments here even if the titles weren't totally correct. :) Cheers - Gary
Bartley Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 6:51 PM
Thanks Gary. I'm a wild and crazy guy especially when it comes to my poetry.
Jones Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 12:35 AM
Charming to read about you Ben!
Bartley Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 6:51 PM
Thanks. Ilike reading your poetry too. My apologies for the late reply.
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 2:41 PM
This is a lovely Bio! You can use this as hour CV! ( without the exhaust, of course) Very nicely done. Like the way you have structured it! Nice to know you play the flute! need strong cheeks! I learnt some as a child and initially it hurt. Gave up to pursue studies!!
Bartley Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 6:54 PM
Studies are good. Thanks for the comments. I've been playing flute for over 40 years now and making bamboo flutes ever since I lost the flute gifted to me by a friend about 30 years ago, I believe.
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 2:34 PM
Thank you, Ben, for the honor of placing in your contest. I appreciate finding my name on the list. I enjoyed reading your Bio. Pretty neat ideas. Sara K
Bartley Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 4:38 PM
Awesome. I'll have to go to your poems to see which one it was. Thanks for entering.
Caliri Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 2:08 PM
Hey Ben! I wanted to thank you for placing me 6th in your contest. Just curious: how many entries were there?
Bartley Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 4:08 PM
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