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The Belle of the Ball - Repost

Note: This is a long one. Just a warning before you start reading. : ) Outside the walls stood a handmaiden gazing Twisting her skirt between fingers so frail Patches of burlap were sewn on the garment Cut from a sack of a barley oat bale Oh how she dreamed of the opulent palace Silver and gold and the finest of lace Gowns made of velvet with ribbons of satin She spun around with a smile on her face As if a princess, her blonde hair a flowing Blue skies above now the tint of her eyes Hearing a song on the early spring breezes Never once noticed the coming surprise Then saw him on horseback and blushed like a petal Found on the reddest of roses that grew Knee bent to curtsey, feeling embarrassed Knowing this gesture is what she should do “Good day my fair maiden, your dance was enchanting” He said as he smiled, his kindness was felt “So sorry my prince, I did not see you coming” Again on the soil before him she knelt “Rise up,” he said as he slid from the saddle “There is no need for such formality, for one of such beauty tis I who should bow” Saying this he touched the earth with one knee Once more she blushed like an apricot sunrise Standing he reached out and taking her hand Wondered, “What brings you by here on this morning, adding such loveliness to our fine land?” “Your majesty, I’m but a servant daydreaming, Seeing myself quite the belle of the ball Very much childish I know you are thinking For I belong far outside this great wall” He pondered a moment, his chin now he fondled Suddenly grinned with the happiest glance “Well now fair maiden, if thou would permit me Please be my guest at this evening’s spring dance?” “Oh handsome prince I could not even think it Look at my dress, I have nothing to wear Merely these rags and an old pair of high tops Never to mention the state of my hair” “Never you mind and I kind of like high tops Maybe some jeans and a tank top in red Pull your hair back and it will be perfect Nothing you’ll need when we climb into bed” “What’s that you say, you want sex after dancing Beat it you creep, I’m abreast of your game I’ll spread these legs not for anyone fancy Damn it, you men, every one is the same” As he departed, rejected and sneering She stomped away feeling angry and mean So here you find such an unhappy ending The truth is she only had eyes for the queen

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Date: 9/6/2019 8:04:00 AM
The turn in the story can be felt after the hope of a connection and the ending comes as shocking. Great story telling Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/6/2019 8:14:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. I am happy you enjoyed my fun take on an old theme.
Date: 9/5/2019 9:49:00 PM
Eyes for the queen ha, only you could dream this one up, I think I remember this one actually you are quite the storyteller!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/6/2019 7:40:00 AM
Thanks again my friend. Just letting the words go where they took me.
Date: 9/5/2019 8:29:00 PM
such a well penned story in poetic form, the ending had a spectacular twist to it, i never saw it coming...wonderful write my friend glad you shared it again :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 9/6/2019 7:40:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. Just hoping for a few smiles today. : )
Date: 9/5/2019 7:52:00 PM
This was so much fun to read! I love the form, the story, and, especially, the ending!! The modern twist was unexpected and adorable <3 Now, was this how the story really ended or was it the dejected prince's version? LOL ;)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/6/2019 7:39:00 AM
I'm not sure but you could be on to something. : ) Glad you had fun with this
Date: 9/5/2019 5:25:00 PM
Lol I remember reading this one! And still the ending I was not expecting! Loved it then and still do!;) a fun write!;$
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Chris Green
Date: 9/6/2019 7:39:00 AM
Thanks so much Brenda. just trying to bring a little humor to the site
Date: 9/5/2019 5:17:00 PM
I've written one with the same title but this is so so different to mine, I love the unfolding story with the twist at the end - more sinderfella than cinderella!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 5:23:00 PM
Thanks Jan and whats funny is, when I posted this before only 4 people commented on it and one of them was you. : ) So, thank you again my friend.

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