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The beauty in these words

The beauty in these words Rainbows o’er the valley, vibrant colors on the hill Coconut and apple pies now cooling on the sill A warm day in November as if fall has turned to spring Hummingbirds and butterflies and cardinals on the wing A picnic in the meadow out beneath an old oak tree Picking out the different shapes in all the clouds we see A garden filled with flowers blooming every shape and size A cool breeze ever flowing neath the bluest azure skies A pathway through a forest that the two of us explore The rhythm of the ocean waves a’ crashing on the shore A choir singing on the square as snow falls from the sky The sound of ringing sleigh bells as it slowly passes by A chocolate covered sundae with sweet cherries on the top The windmill spinning on the farm that never seems to stop Every single star we see a’ twinkling on the night An April morning sunrise oh so wonderful and bright A Sunday morning journey through a park that we will walk Some quiet conversations as we find some time to talk A cozy roaring fire on the coldest winter day A sailboat on the ocean that shall take our hearts away The beauty in these words I write are just my point of view Of all the wondrous things I dream each time I dream of you Everything that’s perfect and of all that it can be These and so much more are what your love it brings to me Good night Soupers

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Date: 4/21/2017 6:25:00 PM
I just found this Chris, It is truly a jewel, sparkling with warmth and light. Congrats on being on the "best new poems" list !!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 8:16:00 AM
Thanks so very much Lenna. I am happy you found this one and enjoyed it.
Date: 4/20/2017 3:07:00 PM
This is a beautiful rhyming love poem to me. Yes congrats on potd. This will be my fav. poem.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/20/2017 5:50:00 PM
Thank you Darlene, so very much.
Date: 4/18/2017 1:02:00 AM
Whoa Chris! What a grand and eloquent write. Congrats also for potd.
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Date: 4/18/2017 8:24:00 AM
Thanks so very much Jannie
Date: 3/29/2017 3:24:00 PM
Your problem is magnificent Chris and so deserving of POTD. Congratulations! 7 ; ) Easter blessings, Connie
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Chris Green
Date: 3/29/2017 3:30:00 PM
Thank you so very much Connie I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 3/27/2017 6:26:00 AM
I love how you added delicious treats to entice one more deeply into this romantic enchanting place. Love is in full bloom through your gorgeous poem Chris :-) Magnifique :-) Congratulations on POTD! so deserving of this honour. many blessings to you, lynn
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Chris Green
Date: 3/27/2017 8:14:00 AM
Thank you again Lynn for your uplifting and encouraging comments on my poem. I appreciate all of the kindness you show me.
Date: 3/24/2017 12:44:00 AM
wow! I must say, you penned this very great. well-done for the excellent gem. congratulations for the POTD.............AM
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Chris Green
Date: 3/24/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thanks so very much for your kind words AM. I appreciate your visit today
Date: 3/24/2017 12:20:00 AM
You got me on the second line, coconut and apple pie, both my favorite things but a combination I'm yet to try. Your words are beautiful, congrats on POTD Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 3/24/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Maria. I am happy you enjoyed this one. Oh, actually cherry is my favorite but I liked the way coconut and apple sounded together poetically. :)
Date: 3/23/2017 10:19:00 PM
It's a wonderful day..sweet beautiful lines to start my day :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/24/2017 8:16:00 AM
I am happy they did that for you. Thank you so much Riya.
Date: 3/23/2017 9:30:00 PM
Well-written.... congrats on being chosen...
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Chris Green
Date: 3/24/2017 8:16:00 AM
Thank you Bernard.
Date: 3/23/2017 5:27:00 PM
WONDERFUL POEM CHRIS
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2017 5:32:00 PM
Thanks so very much.
Date: 3/23/2017 3:45:00 PM
A classic Chris what a wonderful expression of love and happiness. Congrats on POTD.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2017 3:50:00 PM
Thanks so much Phil, I am glad you enjoyed this one.
Date: 3/23/2017 2:42:00 PM
Good Afternoon Chris. I'm still learning my way around and learning navigation however I did learn The Poem Of The Day. I know I commented previously but this is different. Please accept my sincere congratulations on your most wonderful entry being chosen Poem Of The Day. If you read back my original review you will know what I think and that I am sincere in saying so that you and your entry are so deserving. Have a wonderful night.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2017 2:46:00 PM
Thanks so much Lisa. I really appreciate you leaving your wonderful thoughts on my poem a second time. It was not necessary but it sure does make me smile. Thank you again my friend.
Date: 3/23/2017 2:15:00 PM
Great poem Chris and many congratulations on being POTD.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2017 2:18:00 PM
Thank you so very much Elizabeth. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 3/23/2017 10:28:00 AM
This is awesome. Very nicely done.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2017 10:38:00 AM
Thanks so much Robert
Date: 3/23/2017 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations, Chris! No one deserves it more than you do.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2017 10:12:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. That is such a nice thing to say.
Date: 3/23/2017 8:39:00 AM
Chris, congratulations on Poem Of The Day with this beautiful rhyming poem, well done ~
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2017 9:03:00 AM
Thanks so very much for your kind thoughts my friend.
Date: 3/23/2017 8:31:00 AM
Pure visions of love, Chris. A worthy POTD. Kudos to you, a poet master of romance. Love and best wishes.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2017 9:02:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 3/23/2017 8:26:00 AM
Reads like falling in love, wonderful pen Chris. Congratulations on potd, swoon worthy write :) xomo
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2017 9:02:00 AM
I am happy you found this one swoon worthy, that makes me smile.
Date: 3/23/2017 7:07:00 AM
Who could ask for more than all the wonderful things you've described so eloquently, Chris?
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2017 9:02:00 AM
Thanks Lin, that is such a nice thing to say.
Date: 3/23/2017 7:02:00 AM
A beautiful poem Chris :)
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Date: 3/23/2017 9:01:00 AM
Thanks so very much Gary
Date: 3/23/2017 6:38:00 AM
WoW! Chris, this is beautiful. Your content is great, the imagery is breathtaking, and the rhyme and flow of this piece is sensational. I found it to be very romantic as well.And "the beauty of the words" were amazing.This was a lovely way to say" Good Night".Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was most definitely well deserved. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2017 9:01:00 AM
Alexis, I always smile when you stop by to visit. Thank you for the kindness that you always share with me. I appreciate you.
Date: 3/23/2017 4:58:00 AM
- A stunningly beautiful poems, Chris - Congratulation on your p.o.t.d. - ... really deserved !!! - # 7 + hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2017 9:01:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am thrilled you liked this one
Date: 3/22/2017 8:42:00 PM
Chris my darlin' friend this is one of your most lovely writes that touches the heart so tenderly and so softly.I love it!You do know this ol' country girl has to give you a '7' and a fav for this romantic lil' gem...lol. Big country hugs and smiles to you...Mary :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2017 9:00:00 AM
Thanks so very much again Mary. I appreciate your visits and the nice words you always leave for me.
Date: 3/22/2017 10:09:00 AM
This is a fave, Chris:) poetic beauty at its best:) a 7:)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/22/2017 10:24:00 AM
Thank you so very much Jo. I am truly happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 3/22/2017 4:52:00 AM
Chris Chris Chris. Morning. I've said it before but I'll say it again. I am out of words and adjectives to explain what I read and see. Beauty (check) Rhyme (check) Poeticness (check) Imagery (check) So you see all your poetic checks are present and accounted for. You have such a way to express and execute your words and phrases. It is evident here in this entry alone. You may have said Good Night Soupers but I say Good Morning Poet. Well done in its entirety. I don't know how long it takes you to complete and entry however look at the end result......
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Chris Green
Date: 3/22/2017 10:23:00 AM
Lisa, Lisa, Lisa, my friend, your encouraging and uplifting comments are always a gift waiting for me to find. Like each poem of mine you read is a Christmas Tree, I can't wait until morning to see what is waiting beneath it.
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