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July 15, 2022
entered in the "A Quiet Place" Contest
Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

September 30, 2022
entered in the 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 15 Contest
Sponsor: Mark Toney

Strand Premier 1192~~~NA  2-28-23

Marcy 18, 2023
entered in Anthony Biaanco's In the Grass Poetry Contest

I've spread my blanket on a grassy spot beneath a grand, appealing willow tree. I relish how its long, green, wispy leaves, which almost touch the ground, envelop me. I watch them swaying in the gentle breeze as I sit--silent, lost in pensive thought. As one who feels that solitude can lead to peace, I've found the perfect spot I sought. I brought my pen and paper just in case . . . but suddenly I’m nodding and my eyes are closing. For a little while, I'll sleep. Perhaps I’ll write a poem when I rise.

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Date: 11/23/2020 8:14:00 AM
Ahhh!! I like this one. Always have pen and paper in hand, well, almost always. Thanks for dropping by.Congrats on your win. Sara
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/23/2020 9:49:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sara. Janice
Date: 10/18/2020 12:57:00 PM
oh this is lovely. It is so nice to write in such a situation as this. I hope Brian awards this a win
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/20/2020 2:53:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice
Date: 10/17/2020 9:48:00 AM
I was right there with you, Janice. What a wonderful invitation to leave our phones and watches behind so we can listen and clear out minds for inspirations! Congratulations on your win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/17/2020 9:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sam. Janice
Date: 10/17/2020 6:52:00 AM
Wonderful poetry, that takes one there..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/17/2020 7:02:00 AM
Thanks so much Harry. Janice
Date: 10/17/2020 6:35:00 AM
Hi Janice. Very nice penning. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/17/2020 6:48:00 AM
Thanks so much, Linda. Janice
Date: 10/16/2020 4:03:00 PM
Hello Janice … I really enjoyed your poem Janice, especially the advice on leaving the electronic devises at home. Great advice indeed - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/17/2020 6:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lindsay. Janice
Date: 10/16/2020 9:00:00 AM
Yes sometimes when it is choice it is beautiful.. My muse is also inspired by such things and people need to put their phone down sometimes and admire the wonders around them...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/16/2020 12:42:00 PM
Thanks a million, S.O.! Janice
Date: 10/16/2020 5:37:00 AM
I feel the serenity of your place of isolation through your words--your muse truly inspired you, Janice-- in this hard to execute form.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/16/2020 5:44:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 10/16/2020 1:59:00 AM
No modern gadgets to distract you, a perfect place to gain inner peace. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/16/2020 5:45:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. Janice
Date: 10/15/2020 10:49:00 PM
What a lovely piece!..You take me to where you are dear Janice. Keep coming.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/16/2020 5:46:00 AM
Thanks so much, JCB. Janice

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