Get Your Premium Membership

The Beautiful Night Sky

As I walked back home tonight, I looked up and noticed the beautiful moon. Some large pine trees filtered the light, I paused to look, didn't want to walk on too soon. The sky was clear, filled with diamond stars. They appeared to be just within reach. But, I knew they were so very far, from where I stood on the lonely beach. I stared intently at the beauty of the night sky, trying to capture and imprint it in my mind. But for an unknown reason, I began to cry, wondering how this scene could be unkind? I recalled seeing this sight so many times before. But the memories associated with it then, were filled with so very much more. How did it all fade away, and when? The same sky, but in so many distant places. We experienced life from an almost picture perfect view. Then the scene drastically changed, but not the faces. We realized that time had run out on being me and you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/7/2019 10:25:00 PM
Sometimes when I am staring at a world that seems surprisingly more vivid and star-filled than I have ever remembered it before, the vastness of it overwhelms me, and I wonder about the other times, the people who used to be here with me, staring at the same beach. So beautifully and poetically done, Sandra!
Login to Reply
Weiss Avatar
Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/7/2019 10:44:00 PM
Thank you, Caren. At times it seems so endless, and vast, then one particular sight or memory comes and closes around you. The sky remains as we now see it, we do not.
Date: 2/7/2019 7:28:00 PM
I can so relate to this Sandra. I have often wondered why we give our hearts to the past. It seems as we get older the realization sets in that the best years of our lives are in the past making it harder to leave behind. Emotive write:)
Login to Reply
Weiss Avatar
Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/7/2019 7:53:00 PM
That certainly makes sense, Daniel. You have given me something to think about. I feel the pain of loss, thinking it will never be done. But it may be also that the past and lack of being able to create a new one hits home. Time is limited. Thank you, Daniel, for more than a comment...

Book: Shattered Sighs