The Beautiful Duckling

there he lay all curled up in a ball

laying out in the sun to dry his silky down feathers

who could have imagined this little duckling was really a swan

the prime of the litter and the joy of his mother

who could have imagined that all the ridicule and all the heartache was over nothing

this beautiful duckling was destined for greatness

he will walk across the edge of the pond and proclaim his love for another

he will never cower now

now that his identity is truly revealed

he never was an ugly duckling

no, not ever

he was just a beautiful swan in wait for this magical moment!


gwendolen rix
12-12-14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 14, 2014 at 6:55 AM
Sweet poem dear friend. Life is full of uncertainties and here quite often we see such wonderful changes, which always stir our minds to believe that God is great. Hope you are keeping well Gwendowen. I have placed a Poem cum Song which you can hear on You Tube also. If you like the Song please leave your comments on You Tube also if possible. Sorry that I am not very regular on PS nowadays. Love and best wishes for a Merry Christmas.......Ravindra K Kapoor
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December 12, 2014 at 4:12 PM
Gwendolen love the metaphor here. You never know when the ugly duckling will turn into a swan. well done Anne
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