The Beautiful Drowning


"The Beautiful Drowning" 

Barefeet 
dancing in the sand
the warm ocean licks
insolent toes 
to its command
whispers its secrets
calling us in deeper 
indolently caressing 
our naked futures away 
legs wrapped around 
warm bodies, we are far gone
way past the markers 
we swim like koi 
treasure sought, a kiss taken
salty sweet given, 
then drifting like poets
coquettishly brazen,
seductive we 
softly graze the forgotten,
fingers trace the lines 
of neck and silky waist
we cling to the concept of 
diving for pearls 
way past the marks 
the old safety buoys,
no need for words
to read the other,
now wanton laughter,
primitive currents 
towards the cool world 
of another
feet leaving gravity 
we venture forward
listing like a welcome mistake
into the great hereafter 
becoming one thought 
each consumed by the other  
music pulses in our co-joined form
we move like tides 
pulling into each other
ever closer 
waves wash over us 
we become;
submerged 
in the beautiful 
drowning
of it all,
we are far from 
safe harbour 
in the soup 
with wild things
we forget creatures
with sharp teeth and fins 
when we’re skinny dipping 

scribbling 
the night away
diving for pearls

and other 
tricky things

(LadyLabyrinth / 2022)





"Love in Motion"/ Icehouse
https://youtu.be/RB1G3hdg9vI

“Primitive Man” Full Album, Icehouse
https://youtu.be/BbEZ9wRPO80





Is buoy pronounced boy?
"If you've grown up in the USA, you may be wondering why we're discussing these words together. After all, “boy” is pronounced to rhyme with “toy,” while “buoy” is pronounced “boo-ee,” so they don't sound alike. However, in other English dialects, such as British and Australian English, “boy” and “buoy” are homophones."

thankfully I retain a sense of humour -

and I'm still here. What's a girl to do? ;) Xx
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Anaya Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 6:10 PM
This brings me joy, it made me feel like a free spirit, unafraid. A beautiful drowning indeed. Swoosh, your gentle sense of humor.
Labyrinth Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 7:32 PM
some days it's quite brittle. Swoosh, big surf. L xx
Goldsmith Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 10:58 AM
What a write. Love how you added the information are the bottom. In life we need to always keep our humor and in this crazy world we really need it. "What's a girl to do?" Write more wonderful writes. Have great/fun/blessed weekend writing away..............
Labyrinth Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 6:01 PM
humour, my beautiful woman, is the thing that always pulls me through (along with imagination and creativity), without it, I would be long gone by now, 6 ft under. I am not alone in that circumstance, here... that much is for sure. Xx
Goldsmith Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 3:54 PM
We all have those moments just cover them with humor. It helps to keep one from going crazy in this crazy world. Be blessed/safe.......................
Labyrinth Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 3:47 PM
I find a sense of humour assists in this place...and in life. I had a moment. ;) xx
Labyrinth Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 10:50 PM
“Primitive Man” Full Album, Icehouse
Labyrinth Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 10:50 PM
https://youtu.be/BbEZ9wRPO80
Labyrinth Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 10:49 PM
The Divinyls - All Pretty Things (2007)
Labyrinth Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 10:50 PM
https://youtu.be/KMqmZzY8YgU
Labyrinth Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 10:44 PM
"Make Out Alright"/Divinyls
Labyrinth Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 10:44 PM
https://youtu.be/n5Ji1oYmEFQ
Labyrinth Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 10:41 PM
Icehouse - Love In Motion w/ Christina Amphlett
Labyrinth Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 10:42 PM
https://youtu.be/26HngY3zPrE
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