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The Beautiful Drowning

"The Beautiful Drowning" Barefeet dancing in the sand the warm ocean licks insolent toes to its command whispers its secrets calling us in deeper indolently caressing our naked futures away legs wrapped around warm bodies, we are far gone way past the markers we swim like koi treasure sought, a kiss taken salty sweet given, then drifting like poets coquettishly brazen, seductive we softly graze the forgotten, fingers trace the lines of neck and silky waist we cling to the concept of diving for pearls way past the marks the old safety buoys, no need for words to read the other, now wanton laughter, primitive currents towards the cool world of another feet leaving gravity we venture forward listing like a welcome mistake into the great hereafter becoming one thought each consumed by the other music pulses in our co-joined form we move like tides pulling into each other ever closer waves wash over us we become; submerged in the beautiful drowning of it all, we are far from safe harbour in the soup with wild things we forget creatures with sharp teeth and fins when we’re skinny dipping scribbling the night away diving for pearls and other tricky things (LadyLabyrinth / 2022) "Love in Motion"/ Icehouse https://youtu.be/RB1G3hdg9vI “Primitive Man” Full Album, Icehouse https://youtu.be/BbEZ9wRPO80 Is buoy pronounced boy? "If you've grown up in the USA, you may be wondering why we're discussing these words together. After all, “boy” is pronounced to rhyme with “toy,” while “buoy” is pronounced “boo-ee,” so they don't sound alike. However, in other English dialects, such as British and Australian English, “boy” and “buoy” are homophones." thankfully I retain a sense of humour - and I'm still here. What's a girl to do? ;) Xx

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Date: 8/18/2022 6:10:00 PM
This brings me joy, it made me feel like a free spirit, unafraid. A beautiful drowning indeed. Swoosh, your gentle sense of humor.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/18/2022 7:32:00 PM
some days it's quite brittle. Swoosh, big surf. L xx
Date: 7/30/2022 10:58:00 AM
What a write. Love how you added the information are the bottom. In life we need to always keep our humor and in this crazy world we really need it. "What's a girl to do?" Write more wonderful writes. Have great/fun/blessed weekend writing away..............
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/30/2022 6:01:00 PM
humour, my beautiful woman, is the thing that always pulls me through (along with imagination and creativity), without it, I would be long gone by now, 6 ft under. I am not alone in that circumstance, here... that much is for sure. Xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/30/2022 3:54:00 PM
We all have those moments just cover them with humor. It helps to keep one from going crazy in this crazy world. Be blessed/safe.......................
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/30/2022 3:47:00 PM
I find a sense of humour assists in this place...and in life. I had a moment. ;) xx
Date: 7/29/2022 10:50:00 PM
“Primitive Man” Full Album, Icehouse
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/29/2022 10:50:00 PM
https://youtu.be/BbEZ9wRPO80
Date: 7/29/2022 10:49:00 PM
The Divinyls - All Pretty Things (2007)
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/29/2022 10:50:00 PM
https://youtu.be/KMqmZzY8YgU
Date: 7/29/2022 10:44:00 PM
"Make Out Alright"/Divinyls
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/29/2022 10:44:00 PM
https://youtu.be/n5Ji1oYmEFQ
Date: 7/29/2022 10:41:00 PM
Icehouse - Love In Motion w/ Christina Amphlett
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/29/2022 10:42:00 PM
https://youtu.be/26HngY3zPrE

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