The Beat Goes On

He was eager to have friends.
He was glad to see us.
He was ready to show off his bunk-beds.
He was 4.


He was arrogant. 
He was not afraid to tell the teacher
He was going to marry me "someday".
He was 6.

He was there, but I ignored him,
Angry from age 5. I was not going
to marry anybody except my daddy.
He was trying; He was 8. 
I stuck out my tongue, mean.

He was intense.
He was sincere.
He was genuine.
He was 10.

He was learning.
He was developing.
He was interested.
He was 12.  

He was understanding.
He was kind.
He was sensitive.
He was 15.

He was easy.
He was sweet.
He was open.
He was 17.

He was intense.
He was sincere.
He was himself.
He was 20.


He was kind.
He was considerate.
He was ready to become a Daddy, at 21.
And he was quickly snapped up by me, a Mommy at 20.

That was in 1971, and we are still together.
With 3 children, two sons-in-law, and 10 grandchildren.
Don't discount your childhood friends, women. Pay attention!
You do not want to lose the best possible "he" you've ever known.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Theraven Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 12:20 AM
Caren, Sounds wonderful...matchmaker met her match. -Richard
Krutsinger Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 6:37 AM
Yes, this is true, Richard. Thank you for reading my old stuff. Ha!
Gauthier Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 1:50 PM
This is truly adorable, Caren. Marvelously endearing.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Thank you, Line. My husband will be excited too.
One Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:44 AM
Lovely poem Caren..
Krutsinger Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Thank you, Silent One. I appreciate it so much!
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