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glimmering in the rays of dawn’s new light gentle waves crash swiftly against the shore starfish and sand crabs bustle in a fight for azure salty sea that we adore gentle waves crash swiftly against the shore squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine for azure salty sea that we adore appealing to those who walk the shoreline squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine a piece of driftwood moves with the water appealing to those who walk the shoreline like the adoration of my daughter a piece of driftwood moves with the water carefully caressing the soft sand sight like the adoration of my daughter lovely as the wonders of the beach white carefully caressing the soft sand sight starfish and sand crabs bustle in a fight lovely as the wonders of the beach white glimmering in the rays of dawn’s new light November 22, 2019 Seagulls Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 12/22/2019 5:58:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Gina.
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Date: 12/20/2019 2:08:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Gina
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Date: 11/22/2019 2:02:00 PM
Beautifully written Gina. I can see it clearly and I feel like going to the beach :)
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Date: 11/22/2019 9:00:00 AM
WoW! Regina, You painted a clear picture of the beach. I could just imagine myself in the whole scene. I love the beach and I enjoyed this write! I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/22/2019 8:25:00 AM
So lovely, vividly descriptive, Gina. Janice
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Date: 11/22/2019 7:30:00 AM
Beautifully done Gina. I really enjoyed this. Best wishes in the contest
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