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The Bard of the Cotton Fields

Attached to the trees, ...of his mind’s fascination. Caressing virgin pages With a borrowed pen. Trapped in a time... ...of being owned by someone. Where freedom was only, for the birds in the wind. He’s heard of New York, He’s heard of LA... These are the thoughts, He shares with the moon... The humid day... ...blows dust on his face. His father runs over, “Get ta pickin’ boy soon!!!” The freedom has silenced, Reality...came back to mind. No one’s ready for the truth he uncovered, Not even the land...that he proudly calls home. Freedom does exist... Within the mind of a poet. Not just in the sky... Where the freedom bird’s flown. At his father’s request, He starts pickin’...pickin’ inspiration... .. on desolate plantations of lies, ...of his father’s 40 acres and a mule. Shackled to his dreams, The wind whispers slavery’s sorrow... Hummed by the workers abroad. Lord, this boy’s not a cotton pickin’ fool. Uneducated...his creations are sketches, Poems in pictures of young boy dreams... In the midst of slavery...he’s only a slave to his art, And only...on the page can he run and play... His music...is the worker’s song ...pickin’ cotton blues, The rhythm of chains, and whistles of security afar. For now...he sneaks off to his muse...a shade tree, Hiding from the hot Georgian sun at bay. While American kids ride their bicycles, His recess is confined to his mind. As the whistles grow farther into the distance, It’s time for his imagination to play and run. With bloody hands...he hums aloud, Cooled by the un-racial breeze...caressing virgin pages... ...sketching his poems with a borrowed pen, Under the very tree...where his forefather’s hung from... ________________________________________ Note: Inspired by the work of Christopher Higgins

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Date: 2/16/2010 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Mac's Contest Raul. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2010 3:31:00 PM
Congrats Raul on your winning poem in Mac's contest.. a wonderful write and a wonderful win for a wonderful poet ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 10/4/2009 10:43:00 AM
hot poem list, nicely penned
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Date: 9/23/2009 4:09:00 PM
Wow Raul, i don't think you will write a longer one than this. Another incredible write >> James
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Date: 9/23/2009 2:27:00 PM
Very Nicely Done... I was Thinking you were going to say the name of Langston Hughes, tho' (He wrote: When Susanna Jones Wears Red)... But, this is an Outstanding write on History, Misery, Hope and Finally Triumph... All within the space of a ... Poem ... I Like the Line cooled by an un-racial breeze... Excellent... MoonBee
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Date: 9/23/2009 4:27:00 AM
Truly a heartwrenching write Raul. Thank you for writing and sharing this outstanding poem. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2009 10:00:00 PM
to stop dreaming is to stagnate and die, a wonderful, inspiraitonal poem Raul!
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Date: 9/22/2009 6:40:00 PM
What an incredible poem, Raul! So nice to see you doing a longer write; you have quite a talent for conveyng a powerful story. So many great lines. There was a slave girl who was adopted by a wealthy Boston family. Cannot remember her name at the moment, but she went on to become a famous author. Awesome write. 7 with a bullet! Love, Carolyn (And Chris is certainly a great source of inspiration for all of us.)
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Date: 9/22/2009 4:44:00 PM
This boy and his children will not live in the fields much longer . for he has a dream that is larger than the tree he writes under..... awsome write!
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Date: 9/22/2009 3:24:00 PM
Hi, Raul! I read your poem over and over and your words keep on flowing like a river...'till it reaches its destination; and you have achieved your goal by describing the misery of a boy, who was enslaved by picking cotton. Your poem describes so well the struggle, the sorrow, the pain and humiliation of an unfortunate people. Your topic is so unique and inspiring. Wishing you the best. Warm regards, Andrew.
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Date: 9/22/2009 3:19:00 PM
Hi, Raul! I read your poem over and over and your words keep on flowing likea river 'till it reahes its destination...and you have achieved your gol in describing the misery of a boy who was enslaved by picking cotton. Your poem discribes so well the struggle, pain and humiliation felt by this unfortunate people, and your topic is so unique. Wishing you the best. Warm Regards, Andrew.
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Date: 9/22/2009 1:59:00 PM
Sensational writing, Raul. Excellent phrasing and flow in this story that can't help but touch ones heart. I thought of Chris' work as I began reading. A great inpiration, my friend! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/22/2009 11:39:00 AM
Ps....this is an absolute fave..keep on dropping hits...one love.
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Date: 9/22/2009 11:38:00 AM
This is pure brilliance Raul..every stanza in this piece speaks to me in a way that I can't explain..the words are moving and the images are so clear to me.. I am totally happy that you would write on this topic and do it so very well...the journey of Blacks in this country is not so different from any other groups that has felt the fire of oppression..you have highlighted this well and did it with class...moving piece.
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