The Artist

<>The ordinary water that she sips
transforms into a sparkling crimson juice
of cherries, cold and sweet, upon her lips.
The blues she sees are sapphire, greens, chartreuse,
and hardly does she know the color white,
for pearl or alabaster it appears.
The fog is lilac mist, and she’s a kite
that climbs the sky while loosing mundane fears.
Consumed by wind, she does not flag.  Instead,
embracing zephyr, soars.  Responses of
this mortal are not common.  Served dry bread,
she’d name it manna sent her from above!
Half Pegasus, on wings of beauty borne,
her other half alights, a  unicorn!


For the Screwed V Contest of Rob Carmack
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 12:17 PM
Wow...Congrats on your top win, Andie!
Ebbs Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 9:33 AM
Congrats Andrea!
Ryerson Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 2:48 PM
WOW Andrea, this is you at your best in my opinion...Had to read it several times through to let it soak in. LOVE the perfect five meter lines, each one of which is a gem! I can't IMAGINE this not placing in someone's contest...Just tell me who it is and I swear to god I'll-I'll-um...be really mean to them! Yeah THAT'S what I'll do...
Ryerson Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 2:48 PM
Fave!
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 9:11 AM
so glad to see this at the top of the podium - another bit of the cherry and it gets the success it deserves! :-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx7
Y. Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 7:16 AM
Andrea, I just stopped by to say congratulation on your 1st place win it was well deserved:-)Alexis
A. Sharma Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 12:44 AM
Wow wonderful Andrea! Love your take, the concluding lines awesome! Congrats on big win!
Harding Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 4:44 PM
This is so cool, Dre! I know you're all about using punctuation in a constructive manner and that attention to detail is really evident in this whimsical write. Congrats on your win, my Dear! xoxo
Haight Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 3:23 PM
What a lovely Sonnet, Andrea. The imagery was magical and so deserving of 1st place! Sandra
Roper Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 12:11 PM
An artist with words, so beautiful set a great artist you are. Congratulations on your win a 7 hugs eve
Carmack Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 10:35 AM
One beautiful poem. I love the range and flow of this one. Congrats and a barrage of hugs!
Manassian Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 10:21 AM
:) Wow, Woman! You sure know how to paint with words! Congrats on your win in Rob's contest. You deserve it. Hugs
A  Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 1:49 AM
Andrea, WOW... the best one yet... SKAT
Carter Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 8:52 AM
I love the last 2 lines, especially the part "on wings of beauty borne".
Sirak Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 12:27 PM
Awesome! This one has a mystical magical beauty. Reading it I felt like I entered a land of myth and legend.
Austin Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 2:32 PM
Is Lexi real or mythological? Whatever, you have made her very colorful. Love, daver
Martin Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 11:12 AM
Loved this, Andrea! Wonderful imagery and imagination! A 7 and a sure winner in myopinion.
Roper Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 10:13 PM
Andrea, a beautiful poem a 7. I'm not truly sure about the artist, I did research but still not quite sure of who the artist is. Thank you for your visit and reading “When A Woman Is Just A Woman”. :~) Hugs Eve
Seal Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 7:09 PM
Well, I can't say I'm particularly taken with Lexi's art, especially the one that looks like someones heart has been ripped out and thrown on the kitchen floor lol. I wonder if she got the inspiration for that when the liver she was about to cook slipped out of her fingers lol. Your poem on your choice of pic creates the perfect image as if painting with words. Take care, Richard
May Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 5:38 PM
Wonderful write Andrea...love the ending lines...
Horne Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 5:14 AM
beautiful - but then you are the sonnet queen of Soup!
Sathasivam Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 11:15 PM
Excellent. You have painted well with your lovely words. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 10:26 PM
You have created a masterpiece that celebrates the painting beyond belief Andrea. This is sure to place high in the contest.
Walker Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 8:49 PM
You can do with words what artist do with paint. Great job sis.
Onclaud Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 2:21 PM
ohh, this is so visual, andie.. i like the interplay of images; well done!.. lovely write... haven't thought of anything yet for this challenge.. huggs
Pinet Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 12:27 PM
The ending was great and effective in both summing up you thoughts and strengthening their meaning...well penned. Emile.
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