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The art of saying nothing

Tides reset whilst on the move, No sudden jolts, keep it smooth. Watch the sun rise and set, No breaks - sun gets on with it. And lives are lived, and rest evolves; Cycles clear all must revolve. Though blinded by inherent thought, Our minds attacked by self-led taunt. When we're dead, what happens then? A babe in arms to begin again? Our only rest is when held and loved, Here rhyme collapses as it got tough. I'm in the middle of birth and grave; No point on journey I can be saved. I see ahead, such tight restraints, My flaws held aloft to view the taint. Despite no failure, I'm lost to cause, Stood stock still in lieu of pause. Funerals just highlight crashing time, I want to dance, feel my life is mine. No amazing feats with crowd approval, Just faith in self and hurt removal. With simple joys not denied a place, As I strive to carve out a happy space. I can't run from weights around my neck, Imposed hostility to keep me in check. Natural joy is my inner state, I hope nothing can destroy this trait. Learning to rest on the curve of an edge, I'll give it a try as I step back from the ledge.

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Date: 1/31/2025 8:54:00 AM
I hope that Albatross hasn’t taken up residence around your neck Dilly, as they can be extremely difficult to shake! (minds attacked by self-led taunt) (my flaws held aloft to view the taint) ain’t it amazing the way we are limited by our own self imposed restrictions, at the same time screaming to let loose and enjoy ourselves; leaves me with one question, is their such a thing as life balance? I honestly don’t know, Damn duality! I can relate so much to this introspective piece, cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/31/2025 10:02:00 AM
Ah it was, just different! ;)
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/31/2025 9:22:00 AM
I did outrun run it in the end with an hour of cardio. Now you've clued me in to my blind confession that I'm feeding the thing I might start announcing 'not today' in a loud enough voice to ward them off :) Thanks you for stopping by, the place wasn't the same without you
Date: 1/31/2025 8:30:00 AM
Mi abuela used to say "La vida sigue", life goes on and on, I forget the rest of it, sure it was good though. I like your humor, keeping it live when collapsing the rhyme. I think your safe with 'natural joy' as you are, and such a talent for saying nothing.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 1/31/2025 4:16:00 PM
*la vida sigue y sigue, mas importante es la libertad" freedom most important. hugs
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/31/2025 9:14:00 AM
That's a sweet saying Anaya, I do love a dose of wise words. Thank you for stopping by, nice to see you back x
Date: 1/31/2025 8:05:00 AM
Dear dd, i see you rhyming here in such a sublime manner, your rhymes are unique and they flow so well that they dont feel forced but just natural! And theres so much depth in your poem: lately iv been watching some videos on youtube about art of silence, and so this title really caught my eye, and without saying too much youv expressed so well, and it isnt a trait everyone have to find that inner joy! What hits the most strong for me here is "I can't run from weights around my neck" whoa! Is this also a poem written while gymming? If so i must say your rhymes are truly impressive! Loved this!
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/31/2025 8:14:00 AM
Ahhh netflix is always on my phone infact everythn is on my phone haha. I actually thought of that line not literally but on a metaphorical level, how sometimes when anxious and trapped in stress it can feel like ones got weights around the neck. Maldivians probably would go scuba divin with weights around their ankle hahah Love this!
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/31/2025 8:10:00 AM
Haha I wrote this whilst procrastinating - I've never actually put a weight around my neck but used to love World's Strongest Man contest - I bet there's a round that involves this. I'll be sure to add in the comments if I write a poem whilst pulling a double decker bus (I have a feeling this show might not have aired in the Maldives lol). Thanks for commenting on this one - I added Netflix to my phone which might have killed my writing whilst on the machines :)

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