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The Art of Morning

Upon rising, awakened by 
ripening scent teasing my nose, 
trilling my lips and tongue, – my taste buds opening
to bird-like songs as dawn's light breathes new life
and hope into my journey, so begins
a fresh flutter of time, an extending 
run of exclamatory chirps and wing-full
stretching – 

Muse beckons, yielding to artist'
pen and eye – we are co-authors, exchanging
thoughtful leafs and sun-dipped pages; mingling natures, 
swapping poetic voice, reversing positions of artist vs model – 
conjuring word-images and interactive, painted-canvases – confounding our seasons of 
blossoming and harvest, embracing God's budding voice and fruitful manifestations, 
His nectar-ed, figurative language, blending human with Divine senses....

displaying contrasts that stimulate exploratory forming
and transitory shading – clearing and clouding
affects both inside and on my outside, as the clutter of 
yesterday, and promise of a spring-like showers soak
crusty sediments with saturating, fertile possibilities; 
all taking bows – the theater that of spiritual mastery – 
                            
                              Mystery is
my source, my echo, my chambered growth.

My resources, exploitable enclaves of poetic walls, primed,
awaiting both solid and abstract vibrations, energizing 
experimental blurbs, those planned and random into searchable
articulations, grasping, too often vainly, for fantastical alliteration 
of sterile, common-place views – 

I am deepened and ready to let air

we are each our best audience
my left-hand meeting your right
for a brisk clap of inspiration followed
by riotous applause....

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Date: 12/13/2022 1:28:00 PM
Chiming in to thoroughly agree, Joe. - multi faceted, sparkling words, ejecting rapt concepts, refreshing combinations.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 12/16/2022 3:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sigrid; you made my day. Blessings!
Date: 6/21/2022 8:47:00 PM
"pen and eye – we are co-authors, exchanging thoughtful leafs and sun-dipped pages; mingling natures, swapping poetic voice, reversing positions of artist vs model "– Wow.... I am in 'riotous applause' of the wonderful collaboration of your pen and eye, both contributing to the composition of such heavenly melodies. I cannot write too much as my comment may exceed the no. of words allowed . To be brief, this is one of the best poems I have read recently, dear Joe and into my FAVE!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/22/2022 10:48:00 AM
You made my day! Thank you so much, Valsa; blessings my friend!
Date: 6/18/2022 4:17:00 PM
such clever deep thinking poetry, Joe. You have a golden pen
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/18/2022 5:06:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea; have a great weekend!
Date: 6/12/2022 9:21:00 PM
Prince~ you are a delightful, deep thinker! Wonderfully descriptive, Huggs, Panagiota
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/13/2022 7:57:00 AM
Thank you, Pangie; fun for me to write in a way that just lets thoughts fly. Soup is a blessing. Blessings my friend.
Date: 6/8/2022 9:37:00 AM
This is lovely. !!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/8/2022 11:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Swetha; so pleased you enjoyed this experimental ride. Blessings my friend!
Date: 6/7/2022 9:44:00 PM
This is wonderful Joe! Of all these beautiful lines, I liked the last verse especially. Blessings, Evelyn
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/8/2022 11:13:00 AM
We so much stronger, more profitable -- in fact, better at everything! -- when join together. Blessings my friend!

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