The "art" of Crying

Glistening crystal drops fall slowly down her face. They hypnotize,
They mesmerize. Slipping one by one onto her silken robe, she stands by the curtained 
window, watching the drifting snow. Back perfectly straight, not a sound from her lovely 
throat. Perhaps she has lost her man, her finances have crumbled..her soul bereft.

I’ve always wanted to cry like that. Having reasons to explore this condition lately, I’m 
wondering if I might have a genetic defect. My tears don’t slowly slide, leaving a trail of 
beauty. They roll down the back of my throat, causing sniffling, snuffling, and for want of a 
better word, snot, to run from my nose. Red faced, swollen, heaving, wads of wet Kleenex at 
my feet.

Well, I can’t skip rocks and I can’t be lovely when I cry. but oh, my dear I make a terrific 
blueberry pie.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 12:46 PM
Lovely poem Barbara, a delight to read>>James
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 5:45 PM
Blueberry pie is always the better choice. Teardrops are too salty. Maybe that's why I cry. I miss the ocean. God Bless. Keep writing (and baking), Vince
Devonshire Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 3:13 PM
Love the way you look on the bright side at the end of this poem, Barbara! I'm not very good at the "Art" of crying either. My eyes swell and turn to slits and seem to stay that way for days. How about if we look for into the art of smiling? Maybe that will work better! (You have return mail) Love you, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 8:15 AM
Excellent work, Barbara!! Made me smile, and my mouth water for some of that pie!!
Goff Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 7:08 PM
BG...PERFECT!!!!! blueberries are in peak season now... on the bluffs of Wisconsin, overlooking the Mississippi river valley!!! you posted this poem very timely! you are very talented!!! much love, jimbo
Peranteau Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 4:54 PM
I did get a laugh out of this one,..yet this poem truly conveys a true happenings ! I know this "action" ! very good poetry Barbara ! james
Hudson Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 4:45 PM
Way too funny, you go girl!- I think blueberry pie will go further than rocks anyday!-AA
Meadows Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 4:41 PM
good poem. check out some of my poems
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