The Aqua Rose

Deep in the Caribbean coral reef;
A bright blue rose, one salted leaf.
The stem has strength of ancient gods.
The roots of time have not withered
Her petals of truth grow strong with age
Her story unfolds from a watery cage
Her stamen: the history of man.
I knew her well, Aqua, my wife.
No longer seen with mortal eye,
You don't hear her sobs: her cry
No sweet hello's, no fond good-bye.
Memories of undying love.
Floating serenely in waters blue
The hottest sunshine filtered through.
The Aqua Rose is my love true.
Her watery grave shall be redeemed.
Long before Aqua was a rose;
She was innocence, personified
She was mine and I was hers
Soon we shall share Eternity.
  Inspired by Catie Lindsey's Contest " Tending the Sprouts "
 My First POEM  Dedicated to my Beloved L E N O R E
  "Aqua Rose" was Written August 29, 1971 4  days After LENORE left me for "Glory"
Inspired by the Contest "Why oh Why?" Sponsored By "Constance~A Rambling Poet"
   In Lovig Memory of My Beloved Wife "Lenore Ellen (Adams) Johnson"
From the Heart of "Harry Daniel Johnson" - AKA - HGarvey Daniel Esquire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Dela Cruz Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 4:52 AM
Wow! You've written and shared so many poems while your very first one was already a masterpiece. I just read through it and i was left with just one word, wow! over and over, wow! I love your choice of words and the metaphors but what i love most was the emotion and how you voiced them out, I may have literally heard it, that's how powerful it was for me. You and your poem are very inspiring...
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 11:14 PM
this, as I told you already, is the first one. You can see for yourself by just clicking on your pages. Do you know how to do that?
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 11:22 PM
I am returning to YOUR first poem at Soup. I am sure I must have read it again as this is a common theme for you. the death of your dear wife. I love how you wrote this one. A well crafted poem, HG, indeed!
Horsman Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 2:25 PM
your first poem Harry and a beautiful dedication to Lenore, and a wonderful inspiring poetic piece...
Breidenthal Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 10:15 PM
I agree with Elaine George, a flawless masterpiece. Always, Laura
George   Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 1:59 AM
Harry, I am so glad you brought me to this sensational poem. Truly a MASTERPIECE. Such a magnificant dedication of love, to your dear Lenore, my friend. Hugs, Lainie
Peranteau Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 1:48 PM
So...I go back to peek; as you I, at your writes of yore, and find this talented and fervent write dear poet...and happy I was to read your pen to slip. And to know a fellow read mine writes; pleased me. TY kindly, and may your days be covered Sir, with natures lamps ! Much love, james
Kendrick Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 5:15 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest..Sara
Augustus Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 2:22 PM
This is a lovely poem. It sounds like a poem that should already be in one of those old dusty books in the library. Those beautiful poems that sometimes the world forgets. Congratulations on getting a win with this dedication to your wife.
Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 2:16 PM
congrats on your win in the contest with this wonderful entry
Fraser Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 7:06 AM
Many congratulations HG on your win in Constance's contest 'Why oh Why' have a lovely weekend >> James
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Congratulations on your win HG. Love,Carol
Neels Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 9:42 AM
Beautiful tribute and congratulations on your win as well HG ;)
Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Hg
La France Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 3:59 AM
Congrtulations on your win in my contest, why oh why ~~
Sweetheart Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 11:50 PM
Congrats HG my silent beau on your win in Constance's contest with this extra special entry .. enjoy your sweet victory this happy weekend with luv forever your "Sweetheart"
La France Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 3:29 AM
This poem is very beautiful Harry, it spoke to my heart and soul~~
Smith Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 5:48 PM
Just read two poems remind me of Titanic. Great movie, though tragic. I have a Celine Dion CD with one of the songs. I wrote an end line poem about her recently. Good poems. Ellen
Chachere Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 3:28 PM
those words sound wonderful, just the sound of it, a watery cage.i like it. The Aqua Rose, with your idea of using the open water to describe Lenore, is so CREATIVE, this is a W-I-N-N-E-R. HG[Harry], I want you to be my poetic brother again.lol i honestly feel you are there, in that place.Strongly. even though we will always be through our spirits.(: I am glad, I finally gave you an idea on the poem you are writing with what i said. much love to you. -Always&Forever Lynn
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 9:26 AM
Is your wife still alive, Daniel?(or do I call you Harvey? ) sorry, I don't even know. I had thought from something you said earlier that she was alive, but this makes her sound like she has passed on. This poem is PRECIOUS. I love the personification of the rose. How strange you chose blue rose. That is the flower i too relate my own self to!! Luv, andrea
Bono Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 5:51 PM
so sad but so well said.
Kendrick Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 12:38 PM
Very descriptive and loving tribute to your wife. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 3:17 PM
I see you found some of your older poems that were gone for so long HG my forever friend. Beautiful and so heartfelt. Love, Carol
Nutter Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 5:32 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week.
Moreno Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 1:47 AM
HG, congrats on your feature of the week...Raul
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