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The bird was blue in the dew morn, he threw his words From a branch place his home base claim, his face was, sour _________________________ January 27, 2019 Poetry/Than-Bauk/Angry Bird Copyright Protected, ID 19-1108-665-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Any Theme Than-Bauk sponsor, Charlies Messina Third Place ________________________________ Submitted to FFI Blog Series 37, Than Bauk Brian Strand Honorable Mention

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Jan Allison

Date: 2/13/2019 3:41:00 PM

love the pic to go with the poem!many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/11/2019 11:46:00 AM

Hi BW, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well deserved win;-) Alexis

Charles Messina

Date: 2/11/2019 7:56:00 AM

So many great writes in this contest, and this was another one. Congratulations on your placement, Constance. Hugs Charlie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/11/2019 6:15:00 AM

Well, that bird surely seems to wear a scowl, Dear Heart. Excellent Than Bauk. Congratulations on your win in Charlie's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Edward Ibeh

Date: 2/2/2019 12:47:00 PM

Lovely, Constance! This is a hard form, which is why I'm so happy I managed to come up with something, lol! Good luck to both of us!:-)

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/28/2019 4:54:00 PM

Hi BW, This is such a tricky form and you did a good job with it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Constance La France
Date: 1/29/2019 7:07:00 AM

Alexis, thanks for visiting, it is a tricky form as you want the poem to make sense, thank you for the compliment ~