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Bird

The bird was blue
in the dew morn,
he threw his words

From a branch place
his home base claim,
his face was, sour 


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January 27, 2019


Poetry/Than-Bauk/Angry Bird
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1108-665-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Any Theme Than-Bauk
sponsor, Charlies Messina

Third Place 

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Submitted to FFI Blog Series 37, Than Bauk
Brian Strand

Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Allison Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 3:41 PM
love the pic to go with the poem!many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 11:46 AM
Hi BW, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well deserved win;-) Alexis
Messina Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 7:56 AM
So many great writes in this contest, and this was another one. Congratulations on your placement, Constance. Hugs Charlie
Devonshire Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 6:15 AM
Well, that bird surely seems to wear a scowl, Dear Heart. Excellent Than Bauk. Congratulations on your win in Charlie's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Ibeh Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 12:47 PM
Lovely, Constance! This is a hard form, which is why I'm so happy I managed to come up with something, lol! Good luck to both of us!:-)
Y. Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 4:54 PM
Hi BW, This is such a tricky form and you did a good job with it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 7:07 AM
Alexis, thanks for visiting, it is a tricky form as you want the poem to make sense, thank you for the compliment ~
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