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The Albino Hummingbird

"If I keep a green bough in my heart, the singing bird will come."
 - Chinese Proverb



I saw a glimpse of orange in a tree today
It was a Baltimore oriole, as he quickly flew away  
My feeders are full with suet, sweet nectar, and sunflower seeds 
To attract my feathered friends and fulfill their dietary needs

I sip my hot coffee as I sit in my backyard, waiting for the show
I am excited to see birds appear that I may not already know
I can hear all their musical singing and some new chirping sounds 
I hope to see a rare bird today, as I see movement on the ground

I see a spring red robin jump and chirp along the fence gate
Then fly to the ground foraging, while singing in a cheery state
A bright blue-Jay lands as the songbirds quickly scatter away
Puffing his blue plumage, chirping, calling out to his mate today 

I go inside to refill my mug since there are no new birds in sight
As I look out and see an albino hummingbird in feathers all white
Feeding, sipping on nectar with opalescent wings rapidly flapping
A rare sighting, I almost missed, I can’t believe this is happening

I walk out to my backyard and no longer see the rare hummingbird
As I sit, I hear a sweet, unusual chirping, not sure what I just heard
I look up and spot the rare white hummingbird perched in an oak tree
I am elated to see it again, hoping it will come back down and visit me

  

2/15/2021 ( Edited on 2/16/21)

Contest: Spring Birds Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 11:30 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem ... a bird we do not have in Norway ... such a beautiful picture of it, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 1:55 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, hugs!
Devonshire Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 10:42 AM
Wow, what a special treat to see an albino hummingbird! This is beautifully written, Tania, and so deserving of first place. (In the Gator Farm nearby, there are albino gators - quite a sight to see.) Congratulations, Carolyn
Kitchin Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Thank you Carolyne!
La France Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Tania, congratulations on your win in my Spring Birds Challenge, I loved your backyard birds, lovely, and I really like the image too, I have never seen a white hummer' well done _Constance
Kitchin Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Thank you Constance and thanks for my placement, I enjoyed this contest!
Gauthier Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 6:16 AM
Delightful poem, Tania. Congrats on your top win.
Kitchin Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Thank you Line!
Kendrick Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Wow!! I wonder did this really happen? I am sure that is most unusual indeed. I see hummingbirds all summer and enjoy them they do add some life to a yard. You know I think these albino events are happening in all species more and more often. Thanks for you visit to my page with congrats. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 3:34 PM
Thank you Sara!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 11:10 PM
Pity you had no camera with you. A rare sight. ~~
Kitchin Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 4:21 AM
Thank you Victor, it's on my bucket list.
Blown Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:52 PM
...there'd be no limits to my time waiting for such a picture....you must feel as if.... you now have three wishes.....wowza.... stan sand
Kitchin Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 3:34 PM
Thank you, but my poem is fictional, I have not personally ever seen an albino hummingbird, I hope to someday!
Hankins Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 1:34 PM
Although I love hummingbirds and watch them, I have never seen an albino. What a rare treat! Delightful poem. Good luck with the contest!
Kitchin Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Thank you, my poem is fictional, I have not personally seen one in person, I hope to someday!
Allison Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 12:55 PM
wow what superb imagery I would love to see any sort of hummingbird for real Tania, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Thank you Jan, hugs.
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