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The Aging Cello

The Aging Cello
This aging Cello’s beauty starts to fade, and once taut strings now sadly stretched and frayed, but still her luscious curves remaining staid, yet silent are the mournful notes she played. The rigid Bow that once caressed her strings, and brought soft sighs that lifted up on wings and drifted with the gentle breeze of spring, no longer there to make this lady sing. The tender notes that drifted in the air, and gently wrapped around this lady fair, no longer bring these coupled hearts to bear the tender moments of their sweet affair. Without her Bow the lady’s on her own while standing in the shadows all alone, and gone the mournful melodies once known as aging Cello’s tender dreams have flown.
December 4, 2020
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Radice Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 3:21 AM
A very poignant but brilliant poem, John. I love the flow and cadence of it all - it has a musicality all of its own. Cheers - Gary
Gondolf Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 4:29 AM
Thanks, Gary, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
King Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 6:54 AM
Beautiful poem full of emotion - Thank You!
Gondolf Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 8:08 AM
Thank you, Pamela, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
Callus Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 1:39 PM
The aging cello and bow might be stretched and frayed, but your pen has compensated for that, John. Indeed a beautiful rendition! Regards // paul
Gondolf Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 2:00 PM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Paul, I appreciate it. John
Hawkins Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 3:26 PM
Wow! Wow! Wow!
Gondolf Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 6:03 PM
Thank you, Shirley, glad I was able to wow you with this one. John
George   Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 6:41 PM
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL IN SO MANY WAYS, JOHN. ~ Elaine
Gondolf Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 7:36 PM
Thank you so much, Elaine, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Wolf Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 7:09 PM
You have penned an 'instrumental masterpiece,' Sir John! I am faving this, and wish that I could double-fave it. It is picture-perfect. ~ Melodious Music, Gershon
Gondolf Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 4:12 AM
Thank you for the kind words, Gershon, I am humbled. And thank s for saving it as a favorite. Happy holidays! John
Cheney Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 6:46 AM
Splendid song from a poets pen to an instrument grown long. Really enjoyed your piece of poetic craftsmanship.
Gondolf Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 3:14 PM
Thanks, Kenneth, I always appreciate your king words. Happy holidays. John
Hershey Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 5:33 PM
John, this is so beautifully sad, very well written. It tugs on my heart strings, stirs the emotions.
Gondolf Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 6:21 PM
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and comments, Annette, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
James Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 1:02 PM
So beautifully written John, felt the tenderness and saddness in your words, Emilia : )
Gondolf Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 2:05 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Emilia, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
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December 5, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Under the guise of a cello, you have personified the way women feel as they age, John. Outstanding writing! (I felt like you were speaking directly to me; this poem probably has that effect on many others.) Hugs, Carolyn
Gondolf Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 12:17 PM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Carolyn. You have a long ways to go before you catch me in the age department! Hugs, John
Nicole Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 6:41 PM
"Without her Bow the lady’s on her own, while standing in the shadows all alone" Two become one. The melody is incomplete, when there is one without the other. Your thoughts caress gently around my heart. This is so beautifully written and presented my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 9:18 PM
The two become one as the bow caresses the strings and sweet music is made. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Brandy, I appreciate you. Hugs, John
Hamilton Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 9:22 AM
Ah I just got the wordplay Bow and beau, well done!
Gondolf Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 9:12 PM
I started to change the spelling to beau but decided to leave it bow and see if anyone would pick up on it.
Hamilton Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 9:21 AM
This is a marvelous write John, kind of reminds me of my last free verse. The cello is a mournful but beautiful instrument. I loved your personification as a woman, I felt every sad word, well done!
Gondolf Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 9:10 PM
Thanks, John, I heard the song “The Old Violin” by Johnny Paycheck a couple days ago and it inspired this poem. I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
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