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The Age of Thirteen

Used to look up at the clouds and dream Shapes reminded me of mounds of whipped cream Delightful summer days Dreaming life away As the pretty fillies caused my ears to emit steam

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Date: 1/29/2022 1:06:00 PM
Those pretty fillies gave you the rush, I'll be they actually made you blush!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/29/2022 1:13:00 PM
Yes I was very shy when I was young! Bet you never would have believed it by the way I am today! LOL
Date: 1/29/2022 7:13:00 AM
Great imagery, and the last line made me smile. Have a great day, Jack.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/29/2022 8:00:00 AM
I could see you smiling from here! LOL Have great day too Bill!
Date: 1/29/2022 5:21:00 AM
Happy memories Jack, bet it seems like yesterday. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/29/2022 5:40:00 AM
Yes... in my mind it was!!! Have a happy!

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