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The Addict

I feel no need of anonymity
to come here and confess my biggest sin.
I crave too much my junk food, certainly,
but eating it has not yet done me in!

I count my calories and do not smoke;
I exercise and never do I drink.
I’ve not had drugs, not even one small toke,
so why no time for dishes in my sink?

Because my passions rule me! No. .  . not flings!
It’s emails, books and films that take my time.
I’ve too much fondness for too many things,
like how I love to sit and make a rhyme. . . 

For there’s one thing that overwhelmingly
consumes me and its name is poetry!

For Anne Currin's  Confessions of a Poetry Souper Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Watt Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 12:23 AM
Hi, my name is John and I'm a poetryaholic. Love your sonnet about your true passion.
Nehls Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 6:53 AM
Very nice poem, Andrea. And true no doubt for many of us. You have a way with words and these sonnets are a carousel that twirls around in our hearts. You probably think and speak in 10 syllable lines. Can relate for sure.... Robert.
Davis Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 8:46 AM
Andrea Maybe we need to start a poetry-a-holics group. Because there's a lot of us with this bad bad addiction. LOL Nice job thanks for the great comment on my Who I Am poem Hugs
A   Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 1:45 AM
Andrea,... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. goodnight. <3 =LINDA=
Dietrich Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 7:52 AM
so that's why everyone is commenting to this one!! haha
Jones Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 5:44 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your featured poem this week...I enjoyed reading it..made me smile...
Dome Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 2:31 PM
Wonderful. I have the same problem, I'm driven for some reason to write.can't help it. Hope there's no cure. Loved your write. Thank you for sharing. Pete.
Austin Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 10:11 AM
Good show. Alas I have all your listed vices -. I should say have had. For years I combined all - a bottle of wine, cigarettes, music on the hi-fi, and poetry on my mind, a pen in my hand over a notebook. Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver
Jubenville Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 12:30 AM
Lovely piece Andrea, very enjoyable addiction I must say, love of writing... Love Ellie
Omara Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 12:12 AM
Lighter, this one. And amusingly lovely.-Red
Horsman Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 10:04 AM
yes i believe one could become an addict of poetry, Yours!!!!!!! i like this, harry
Poet Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 12:22 AM
Revisited this Sonnet for that da Dum da Dum....
Poet Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 1:44 AM
All the good habits!That is YOU Andrea!-kashinath
Austin Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 1:56 PM
Ah. A poem I have not read. After reading this poem, I must congratulate you on your intelligence. So you count calories? How many cals can you consume a day without gaining weight. I am an expert on weight loss, having lost 100 pounds twice in my lifetime. Alas,I am not an expert at keeping the weight off once I've lost it. Love,Dave
Austin Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 1:52 PM
No smoking? No booze? No drugs? My God, you are the worlds healthiest mortal! Alas I have all of these failings, including the junk food and the poetry. I've kicked the first three and rarely indulge in the fourth. My congratulations on your wisdom and this fine poem. Love, Dave
Fooksss Aka Lynette C. Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 9:48 PM
the addict.you're better than me. THANK GOD THAT I AM ALIVE AND SOBER TODAY. .Buffy.
Miles Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 4:45 AM
Ha, genuinely adorable. Quirky & fun. Thank you. Matt
George   Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 2:26 AM
You and I have the same addiction. Actually it get me into trouble sometimes as I completly lose track of time. Great writing girlfriend. Love, Lainie
Arnold Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 5:19 PM
Great read Andrea I has a sweet melodious bounce to it and it has all the ingredients that make your poem smile. Thanks for the congrats I did not know Love Cookie
Clark Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 4:40 PM
Well said Andrea... I believe you are not alone in these thoughts!!! But it is fun and addictive! Best Wishes, Jeralynn
Fraser Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Andrea, i just love the things you love, awesome choices >> James
K. Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 9:13 AM
I could definitely relate to this,Andrea :) Hard to peel myself away from poetry :) thanks for this truly relatable write Enjoyed reading it--:)
Kendrick Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 1:40 PM
I do believe that it can become an addiction. We have to do all things in moderation. I know that you are speaking from humorous voice here. Keep the laughter flowing from your pen. Sara
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 12:35 AM
I love this! How true....real poets get carried away with this art that at times seems obsessive. (big smile). Very fun poem! Mahalo, Connie
Strand Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 12:10 AM
We are beginning to notice your passion Andrea.Thank for for your encouragement today.Rgds Brian
Brown Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Thank you for sharing a piece of your heart in your poetry with us today Andrea. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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