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The Acorn's Secret

As last surviving acorn,
I hang about all day.
My skin is smooth and swarthy
Beneath a chic beret.
Horse chestnuts call me puny
But I don’t really care
For Mother shared a secret
Of which they’re unaware.
She said ‘Son just be patient
And hold your head up high
For one day you’ll have branches
That reach up to the sky.
The birds will serenade you
Throughout your lifelong days
And you’ll provide a shelter
For squirrels in their dreys.
Though wintry winds may batter,
We oaks will stand our ground
And one day, little acorn
Your splendour will astound.’
So now if others mock me
And label me a joke,
I chuckle, knowing some day
I’ll be that mighty oak.

18.04.20

The Last Acorn Poetry Contest -sponsored by John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kauffman Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 9:18 AM
Wendy, this is delightful. Love the message of the acron's mother to her offsprring. Congratulations on your win.
Holmes Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 12:09 PM
Wendy - what a wonderful poem, well done, congratulations on your win David H
Drowley Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 12:21 PM
'Wendy, Congratulations on your win with this captivating personification. David'
Mcgee Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 5:05 PM
a gem Wendy. congrats on your win.
Watt Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 9:52 AM
I am returning once again to one of my previous faves, to once again congratulate you, this time for garnering one of Brian's rare #1 placements! I love everything about this gem from its tone, message, rhythm, and audio. Splendid!
Grimm Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 11:47 PM
A wonderful poem! David
Watson Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 4:34 AM
That's very kind of you,David.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 12:46 PM
Hello Wendy Watson,In this poem, i can see a mother reading this poetry to her child. Enjoy your day my friend.
Watson Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 4:32 AM
Thank you, Darlene. What an encouraging thought!
Watt Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 7:57 PM
Back to wish you congratulations on a well-deserved podium win with your last acorn, Wendy. A Fav! ~ John
Watson Avatar
May 8, 2020 at 12:26 AM
Ever the warm encourager! Thank you so much again for your time and welcome comments, John.
Kauffman Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 7:09 PM
Witty with a dose of whimsy, Wendy! What goes around comes around! Really nicely done. Congratulations on your win! Love the "chic beret" - very creative imagery!
Watson Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 3:43 AM
That's great to hear, Sam. I still have such a love for languages despite having finished teaching a few years back.
Kauffman Avatar
May 8, 2020 at 6:45 PM
A dear friend spent a year speaking french - I spent four years studying french. We got silly one day and had a conversation in french. Now we are reviewing our french so we can continue our conversations. So much fun - I have even started dreaming in french!
Watson Avatar
May 8, 2020 at 12:25 AM
Oh how kind! Thanks for the encouragement,Sam. It went against the grain, as an ex French Teacher, to write it minus the acute accent though!
Ibeh Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 7:01 PM
Such a beauty, this personification poem! Congratulations on you win, Wendy:-)
Watson Avatar
May 8, 2020 at 12:22 AM
I'm delighted that it appealed to you, Edward. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Hawkens Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 12:43 PM
I love this poem. Your poems sing with the heart of nature.
Watson Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 4:02 PM
What a lovely comment, JC. I think that they are so aesthetically pleasing to look at in their prime.
Watt Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 10:38 AM
Fabulous writing, Wendy. Favorite line: "Beneath a chic beret". So clever in your personification of the little acorn. I could see this in a children's book. This could be the theme song of all who feel small, alone, or relentlessly teased. So much hope in the end. Great flow, and heartwarming message.
Watson Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 4:09 PM
Hello John Thank you again for taking the time to read and leave such a thoughtful comment. They are so cute to look at aren't they. We have a large oak in the garden and I'm attempting to grow an acorn from last year with a grandiose vision of leaving an oak to posterity! I'll keep you posted on the progress!
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 2:24 PM
this is a SPLENDID job you did with the theme, Wendy. I sure hope it gets a win. Love it.
Watson Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 3:17 PM
That's so kind, Andrea. Just a light-hearted take on the theme. I've read some deep interpretations which may be more to John's liking.
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April 18, 2020 at 12:23 PM
Wonderful poem Wendy! A winner for me, my best to you! xomo
Watson Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 3:18 PM
Thank you so much for the encouragement,Maureen.
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