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The Absent Years

THE ABSENT YEARS life becomes so sweet so precious life to the eye life in all its forms – the rock strewn stream bubbles life even those worn-round pebbles a silver fish drowned soaked to death in my shower strange how sad i felt after watching it struggle after offering nothing like mixed emotions when i tangle spider’s web the tiny worker tiny artist full of life and i so full of myself death now seems all round and i only half alive in my absent years floating down that rock-strewn stream drowned silver fish, sad spider Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/3/2013 4:24:00 PM
Speaks volumes to the power of observation and just letting life happen -- even when we think we're absent from it. Great thought-provoking poem. Best, Don
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Date: 9/1/2013 6:36:00 PM
I get the feeling that there isn't much we can do about many things except notice and feel as much compassion as possible for just living life :)
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Date: 8/26/2013 9:06:00 AM
Nice poem...looking for more :) A~D
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Date: 8/21/2013 5:05:00 PM
Everything has a purpose, to notice, is to honor that purpose. Lovely introspective poem Daver.
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Date: 8/16/2013 2:25:00 PM
I know so well these feelings.......never before in my life have they been as apparently intense as this past year....Never giving much thought to the life of so small a thing that surrounds me, a bee, a bug, a spider, those ants around me, nature's expectation, like our own, is important.....never had I given it so much thought as I do now.....a most precious thing. Love love this poem!!
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Date: 8/15/2013 3:18:00 PM
Hi, Daver, thanks for visiting me today and I hope to see a new one from you very soon!!
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Date: 8/12/2013 3:48:00 PM
A powerful reflective piece here Daver, part of living is believing I suppose.' part of life experience is accepting death and inadequacy...I think you have done great Daver..!
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Date: 8/10/2013 5:55:00 PM
Daver,you can free yourself from the restraints of tanka and do this as free verse. It's such a wonderful poem. A FAVE for my collection.
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Date: 8/10/2013 2:14:00 PM
Strong imagery and metaphors, Daver. The "worn-round pebbles", more polished, it would seem.:) Always enjoy reading your work! Keep well, love, Mikki
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Date: 8/10/2013 8:59:00 AM
Daver, my friend.....I dig your vibe here man! Extreme coolness dude! I like the Native American like philosophy...."life in all its forms-" I believe this myself....and also try to express such.....keep on keepin' on, brother! jimbo
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