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"I came to the conclusion that unrealized hopes, even small ones, were always wrenching." ~ Nicholas Sparks when follicles don't rupture heart does, bit by broken bit pieces of withholden dreams shattering, eyes leaking pain the agony is immense soul tears that linger unwiped babies remain dreams for now unrealised realities hopes dashed into smithereens fractured frame of frozen mind is this called long-suffering? stillness... the wait continues

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Date: 11/13/2024 11:58:00 AM
Joanna, congrats on your win in my contest, like the quote, like the poem, well done, love Constance
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Date: 10/17/2024 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad write. Life can be filled with pain. Have a wonderful day with your win..........................
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Date: 10/13/2024 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your creative winning work. Way to go. Jueju is not an easy form but yours is seamless. Thanks for sharing your talent. Sara K
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Date: 10/11/2024 10:41:00 PM
true lines, powerful write. congratulations on your win dear poet.
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Date: 9/30/2024 9:35:00 AM
I don't think there is a set time limit to grief, Joanna. Hearts don't seem to mend on a schedule... some never do.
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