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The Unpoetic

I should have been contented with squeezing out neat verses from jumbled, random thoughts, with fashioning stanzas pretending profundity, and with dashing off lines of serious lyrical nonsense. I should have been detached and insulated from pedestrian dalliances with the raw jubilations and searing sorrows of the all-too-familiar souls. I should have taken to heart the art of being aloof to the stirrings of the mind about what to you are such artless triflings with good and evil, with justice and inequity, with ethics in politics. Then I would have been to you a true poet, your cold comrade at the shrine of your stoic art of the brain, not of the heart.. but I'm the unpoetic. .

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Date: 2/14/2011 11:45:00 PM
poetry is bigger than agendas Romeo, it is important to calculate things, (however} most of all to then let the words find you, i think you have written well and look forward to hearing more from you.
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Date: 5/2/2019 12:27:00 AM
Thanks for the comment, Joe.
Date: 2/14/2011 11:02:00 PM
Cool write. ...
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Date: 5/2/2019 12:27:00 AM
thanks, Kib.

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