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The Shadows On The Wall

In the shining sun Many shadows seen In the early morn I see the shadows That the sun shows A shape of a head Is wearing a hat Or I see her face Sometimes a dog A shape of a house What is seen often A shadow of a person Also animals Shapes of different trees The shapes change often

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Date: 1/10/2025 12:23:00 PM
Darlene, I loved this, the imagery is just enough to let the imagination play with with you describe. Excellent! Ron
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Date: 1/16/2025 10:41:00 AM
Hello Ron, Thank you for this wonderful comment. Enjoyoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 9/25/2024 5:08:00 AM
Darlene, thank you for this poem. Now a Fav for me, because i love (yes, love) the shodow of waving trees that the casts on the walls inside our house! & esp when a bird alights on a branch! Big hugs, sally (check your soupmail)
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Date: 9/25/2024 11:05:00 AM
Sally my fav. moon is the full moon. The shadows changes sometimes. One image of a shadow is always the same. Anyway thank yhou for this comment. Hugs. /Darlene/ i did read your soup mail. Di you read my reply? Waiting to hear from you., Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 9/25/2024 11:01:00 AM
Hello Sally, it is so good to hear from you. I watch the shadows on the wall I am also a cloud watcher. s all the time. In late afternoon I see rainbows on the floor. I am also a cloud watcher.. At night when it is dark i watch the sky for the moon and the stars.
Date: 9/13/2024 10:28:00 AM
I see these things in clouds, too, sometimes. A very nice piece, Darlene.
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Date: 9/13/2024 4:14:00 PM
Hello Jim, I also see shapes in the . I am a cloud watcher. There is always something to see in the clouds. The shadows also changes shapes to. Enjouy your evening my friend. /Daarlene/
Date: 8/24/2024 12:45:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative write. Yes, seeing shapes in shadows or in clouds can be fun for all ages. Hugs.... Have a blessed day.....................
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Date: 8/24/2024 3:04:00 PM
Hello Paula, Thank you for the lovely comment. I had fun creating this poem. I love the clouds. i watch them every day. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 8/22/2024 5:13:00 PM
There's sunlight shadows and moonlight, during the day we find fun things, but at night scary. Love your poem!
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Date: 8/23/2024 9:52:00 AM
Hello Alesia, It is so nice to see you on my page. Yes we do. No I do not mean at night, I mean early evening When it slowly turns dark. the sun going down slowly. that is when i see the rainbows on the floor. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/ the rainbws on the floor.
Date: 8/21/2024 2:55:00 PM
Beautiful poem my dear Darlene. The shadows change when the sun moves, and you are right you can see different shapes. Loved it. My hugs Darlene
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Date: 8/22/2024 10:31:00 AM
Hello Maria, I have seen different shapes of shadows. Towards the end of the day when the sun slowly goes down, i see rainbows with shadows. thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs Maria.
Date: 8/21/2024 2:03:00 PM
Well done, Darlene! You have a very impressive body of work... a Poetry soup "heavy hitter!"
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Date: 8/21/2024 2:47:00 PM
Hello Tom Valies, Thank you for this wonder4ful comment. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 8/20/2024 9:35:00 AM
Early in the morning and late in the evening, we see many shadows. They shapeshift into different forms. Seeing some shadows, we even get a scare. A beautiful poem, dear Darlene.
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Date: 8/20/2024 9:59:00 AM
Hello Valsa, Thank you Valsa, I see shadows every day. In the morning and when the sunsets with a rainbow. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 8/18/2024 9:44:00 PM
Hello Darlene, shadows are graceful and beautiful, and are so pleasant to watch. Lovely poem.
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Date: 8/19/2024 9:47:00 AM
Hello Evelyn, Yes shadows are graceful to watch. They are beautiful. Thank you Evelyn. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 8/17/2024 8:37:00 PM
Seeing shadows, are you? lol. Me, too. Me, too. Me, too. ~ Echo Valley
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Date: 8/18/2024 12:21:00 PM
Hello Gershon, Echo back.yes I see shadows every time the sun shines. Sometimes they are the same and sometimes they change. enjoy your day my friend. Darlene/
Date: 8/16/2024 7:04:00 PM
Hello Darlene, a peaceful poem, lovely write. Blessings my friend
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Date: 8/17/2024 10:22:00 AM
Hello M ulu, thank you for the lovely comment. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 8/16/2024 4:51:00 PM
Hmm, shadows seem like they might be fun to watch, like clouds, or like flames, or water fountains.
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Date: 8/17/2024 10:28:00 AM
Hello David Crandall, Shadows are fun to watch. sometimes it could be a shadow of an object in a room. Or a shadow seen but unknown where it is coming from. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/.
Date: 8/16/2024 1:32:00 AM
A cool poem on shadow, Darlene.
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Date: 8/16/2024 9:52:00 AM
Hello Andrea, thank you. I see a lot of shadows in the sunlight. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 8/15/2024 9:46:00 AM
Nice imagery.
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Date: 8/15/2024 10:47:00 AM
Hello Jay. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 8/15/2024 6:09:00 AM
Indeed! In the light, often what is not visible in our dark. Love it! Profound!! You get a FAV!
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Date: 8/15/2024 10:53:00 AM
Hello Joe, Thank you Joe for the lovely comment. Also thank you for the fav. Darlene/
Date: 8/14/2024 5:57:00 PM
Powerful imagery Darlene. Have a beautiful day, my friend.
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Date: 9/14/2024 11:13:00 AM
Hello Jerry, sorry for the late response. i just noticed your reply now. I will and also have a wonderful weekend. My friend. /Darlene/
Date: 8/14/2024 1:20:00 PM
Great imagination and so vivid... Have a lovely day dear..
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Date: 8/14/2024 2:41:00 PM
Hello Silent One, thank you Silent One. Yes these scenes are vivid. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

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