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~THE MOON ~
(Pantoum)


THE MOON IS  NOT TOO BRIGHT TONIGHT 
WHAT'S WRONG WITH THE MOON 
I WISH IT WAS REALLY BRIGHT
I JUST LOVE WATCHING THE MOON 

WHAT'S WRONG WITH THE MOON 
I MISS WATCHING IT SHINE HIGH 
I JUST LOVE WATCHING THE MOON 
PEEPING HER YELLOW FACE THROUGH 

I MISS WATCHING IT SHINE HIGH 
WITH ALL THE CLOUDS PLAYING HIDE 'N SEEK 
PEEPING HER YELLOW FACE THROUGH
SHE CAN PLAY WITH US ALL KIND OF TRICKS 

WITH THE CLOUDS PLAYING HIDE 'N SEEK 
I WISH IT WAS REALLY BRIGHT 
SHE CAN PLAY WITH US ALL KIND OF TRICKS
THE MOON IS NOT TOO BRIGHT TONIGHT.



Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2015



February.29.2016


Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/1/2016 6:01:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful and touching write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/2/2016 2:13:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly, Ravi,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D