The Covered Sky

The sky was covered
With different shapes of clouds
A patch of blue peaked 
It began to rain
After the rain a rainbow

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Date: 12/21/2022 8:50:00 AM
Hello Darlene,this is a lovely tanka,my dear friend,Darlene Be blessed!!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/21/2022 11:04:00 AM
Hello Mulu, Hi! Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 6/25/2022 10:24:00 AM
"The Covered Sky" is a beautiful write. Love it. Have a great/blessed day...........
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/11/2022 4:50:00 AM
Hello Paula, thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
Date: 6/22/2022 11:44:00 AM
A very calming day I would imagine. Hello Darlene :)
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Date: 6/22/2022 3:04:00 PM
Hello FJ Thomas, yes it is a calming day. Hello FJ Thomas. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 6/20/2022 4:15:00 PM
I love rainbows. This is a lovely, sweet... poem. Ann
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Date: 6/22/2022 3:04:00 PM
Hello Ann I love the rainbows to. I hope to see more sun showers. Hugs.
Date: 6/15/2022 10:03:00 PM
Hi Darlene, love the melange of beautiful images you have strung together.....!After the rain, it is so beautiful to see the the clear blue sky with the rainbow...
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Date: 6/16/2022 5:41:00 AM
Hello Valsa, yes after a sunshine rainfall it is good to see the rainbows. I do love the rainbows. Enjoy yur day my friend. Hugs.
Date: 6/14/2022 12:17:00 PM
A brightening rightening; and quite write of You to so do.' Love it.) Oh & blessings to you.!
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Date: 6/14/2022 3:14:00 PM
Hello Joe Maverick, Thank you for the lovely comment. This can happen when not wearing the right shoes. Blessings my friend.
Date: 6/8/2022 5:36:00 PM
After the gloomy weather nature compensates us with a rainbow! Wonderful Tanka, my dear friend, Darlene! Blessings.
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Date: 6/8/2022 5:41:00 PM
Hello Demetrios, Demetrios i love the rain shower. because I know a rainbow will appear. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 6/7/2022 2:11:00 PM
Nice Tanka, Darlene. I liked it all, but the rainbow at the end was the best ending my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 6/7/2022 2:56:00 PM
Hello Bill, the rainbow is also my favourite. Thank you for the lovely comment. Your poetess friend Darlene
Date: 6/6/2022 11:04:00 AM
Dear Darlene, I love your poems - those express beautiful emotions with so much depth - I keep thinking about those images for very long! Thank you for visiting my page - your visit is a wonderful delight! I am honoured with your FAVE! Love and friendship ~ Mala
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Date: 6/6/2022 11:20:00 AM
Hello Mala, Thank you Mala for this wonderful comment. I do the same. Your welcome. I love your poetry. to . Love & Friendship , Darlene
Date: 6/6/2022 10:26:00 AM
I'm into imagining and unfolding the series of events as you mentioned in your poem! What good poetry can't show you? Thanks for this gift!!
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Date: 6/6/2022 11:18:00 AM
Hello Swatha Vangaveti, so nice to meet you. You are welcome. Swetha. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 6/5/2022 6:41:00 PM
I so love the part when the rainbow comes out :)
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Date: 6/6/2022 4:03:00 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, the rainbow is my favourite part of my poem to . Hugs.
Date: 6/5/2022 7:34:00 AM
Hello my dear friend Darlene! The image of your poem is so beautiful and inspiring. I love clouds and I love seeing them in different shapes. This is an awesome tank my friend. I love it and enjoyed a lot. Thanks a lot for sharing! God bless you always. Hugs..
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Date: 6/5/2022 10:50:00 AM
Hello Len, I am a cloud watcher I like to see the different shapes of clouds. Thank you Len. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
Date: 6/4/2022 11:28:00 PM
I get to see this view often here in Hawaii the land of rainbows. This is a lovely tanka Darlene. Blessings xxoo
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/5/2022 6:36:00 AM
Hello Connie, oh you are so lucky. I love rainbows. Luckyu live. Blessings my friend.
Date: 6/2/2022 12:54:00 PM
Nicely crafted tanka, Darlene. Your imagery shed beautiful reflections too. Blessings
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Date: 6/2/2022 3:05:00 PM
Hello Lassad, Thank you for the lovely comment. My imagination wrote this poem. Enjoy your evening my friend.I hope all is well with you.
Date: 6/2/2022 10:57:00 AM
Beautifully done. Panagiota
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Date: 6/2/2022 3:06:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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